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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Gus was a nut-hoarding squirrel obsessed with percussion, whose tail thumped trees in manic succession. He woke the whole wood with a clamorous rap~ till oak limbs collapsed mid-acorn-attack! Gus grinned wild providing rhythmic-induced concussions.
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