Mad Inventions

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Mad Inventions. . We all have lightbulb eureka moments But some take them to the extreme How some things are conceived Could only come from a crazy imagination And a weird hapless dream . Created with good intentions To find solutions and make life easier Mindless inventions Often leave the creator With a hole in their pocket And egg on their face . They may have seemed a good idea at the time But specs for dogs and strange machines Only boggles the mind . Who are these people? Who think they are smart I hate to judge at least they tried But how sad when things Fall apart . But without such minds where would we be now Probably living in caves And throwing spears At wild beasts and cows. . Peter Dome©2020.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/26/2020 11:39:00 PM

A well reasoned poem. Man must go for inventions. Maybe he they'll hit the jackpot. ~~

Peter Dome
Date: 12/27/2020 9:11:00 AM

Hi Victor my friend. thank you so much.So true. I'm working on a time machine at the moment. if only. take care.Pete.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/26/2020 8:30:00 PM

It's okay to "have a light-bulb eureka moment" I agree with you, some take ideas to the extreme. This made me smile and sigh, all at the same time. Poor baby in the photo. You are so clever and creative. :) Brandy

Peter Dome
Date: 12/27/2020 9:15:00 AM

Hi Brandy. thank you for the kind compliments.Much appreciated. you ought to see some I found. Umbrellas to keep your shoes from getting wet, Dog slippers that clean the floor.Take care. Pete.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/26/2020 10:06:00 AM

this one gave me a chuckle..i may be mad but i don't think i've ever had any mad inventions lol

Peter Dome
Date: 12/26/2020 12:14:00 PM

Great stuff. Glad it made you chuckle.I invented the cold water bottle, the rubber frying pan, so of thrown at someone it don't hurt so much.The uplifting invisible bra, the heated butter knife. want to invest?.haha. Thank you take care.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/26/2020 9:09:00 AM

What a cute picture you have put Peter.. A great insight into all those mad inventions.. and yes I agree with your last stanza.. God bless ~ Ani

Peter Dome
Date: 12/26/2020 12:16:00 PM

Hi dear friend.What great gadgets. poor baby doesn't look too pleased poor thing.Thank you take care. Pete.