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How many people in this world,
share the pain that he feels?
Every day he wakes up,
with hope that he heals.
And every day that he wakes,
more movement is gone.
But it's what's still in side,
that keeps him going on.
As he looks back through his life,
he still has his pride.
As his body slows down,
it's still him that's inside.
He keeps his head up,
as he deals with his fear.
Because the strength that's inside,
is why he is still here.
He has no more to lose,
only strength to gain.
Hoping this world,
will learn from his pain.

Dedicated To: John Stewart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/18/2011 8:04:00 PM
Sarge, you are a very talented young man. Please allow God to use this talent for His glory. I hope you the best in all of your endeavors and pray that this time around, you will go all the way!
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Trent Thomas Sargent
Date: 5/20/2011 11:14:00 AM
Hello, I'm posting Trent's poems for him. I'll make sure he gets this comment. He is currently at Rappahanock Regional Jail. P. O. Box 3300, Stafford, Va 22555. He is trying to turn his life around and would love to get letters from positive people. His friend, Ann
Date: 5/12/2011 12:18:00 PM
Trent my Man, That was a good poem man. Thank you for thinking of me. Keep the poetry coming you are good at it . Later John
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Trent Thomas Sargent
Date: 5/13/2011 6:03:00 AM
Hi John, I am helping Trent post his poems. I'll pass this on to him. I know he'll like to know your comment. Ann
Date: 4/29/2011 11:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Thomas. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Trent Thomas Sargent
Date: 5/20/2011 11:17:00 AM
Trent would love to get letters from positive people. His address is Rappahanock Regional Jail, P.O. Box 3300, Stafford, Va 22555. He is trying to turn his life around. His friend, Ann
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Trent Thomas Sargent
Date: 5/13/2011 6:01:00 AM
Thank you. I'm posting poems for Trent. He is unable to because he is in jail. I'll pass this comment on to him. Ann
Date: 4/28/2011 11:32:00 PM
this sounds awful to have this. I have met someone at Soup who has the beginning of it. I would feel so sad. good poem about it.
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Trent Thomas Sargent
Date: 5/20/2011 11:19:00 AM
Trent is currently at Rappanhanock Regional Jail, Stafford, Va 22555. He is trying to turn his live around and would love to get letters from positive people. His friend, Ann
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Trent Thomas Sargent
Date: 5/13/2011 5:58:00 AM
Thank you. I'm helping Trent post his poems. He is unable to because he is in jail. I'll pass this comment on to him. Ann
Date: 4/28/2011 7:48:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative poetry tonight.. hope u have fun and share your many delights with us all in luv..
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Trent Thomas Sargent
Date: 5/20/2011 11:21:00 AM
Trent is currently at Rappanhanock Regional Jail, P.O.Box 3300, Stafford, Va 22555. He would love to get letters from positive people. He is trying to turn his life around. His friend, Ann
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Trent Thomas Sargent
Date: 5/13/2011 5:56:00 AM
Thank you. I'm helping Trent post his poems. He is not able to because he is in jail. I'll pass this comment on to him. Ann
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