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M. R. I.

Another increment of measure drops; And while looking forward and around; Into the reflections of time; I can only wonder what it is I hope to see. And in this capsule of imaging I roam through the inner worlds of my mind Looking perhaps for that hidden path That might eventually make my life immortal. But as I gage cause And search for answers; The reflections seem to do little more than; Simply pass in review.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/5/2011 11:14:00 AM
Yeow! M.R.I as in magnetic resonance Imaging? I had one of those, Leonard, and I'd hated that "capsule". BUT, I love this poem! You've given this a twist and a new turn, to me. Thank you for sharing! Best to you, Mikki
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Date: 3/19/2010 5:16:00 AM
creative poem, funny
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Date: 3/15/2010 5:35:00 AM
Your mind is immortal for the human brain has the capacity to hold three million years worth of material then God calls us in and gives us a new computer chip and we keep on going..The comparison between the brain and M.R.I is an interesting one keep on awing us with your creative writes..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/14/2010 12:41:00 PM
Nice piece of art. I enjoyed the read. Ernilando
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Date: 3/13/2010 12:11:00 PM
Well written!
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