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Open mind and open heart,
I knew i loved you from the start.
Forgot the poison you became, 
you carved my heart and etched my brain.
My aim was true, 
my arrow missed,
I close my eyes and bite my fist.
You drag your feet across my floor,
please don't forget to close the door.

A breech of trust with ill intent,
i'll never know just what you meant. 
Insisting," I cant do this now",
Your angry shot across my bow.
The circle, the triangle, then a square,
it's more frustration than I can bare.
No shame, no sorrow and no regard,
you drag your feet across my yard.
You're walking out again, "it's too hard"
Don't forget to close the door.

Time heals wounds and this will scar.
Just another shattered heart in your repertoire.
I walk, i talk, i live my life
surviving my own personal strife. 
I think about you now and then,
my thoughts control my weary pen.
My water is calm, give or take.
Again I've weathered your might wake.
My yard is patched, I've cleaned my floor. 
It's finally me who closed the door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/3/2018 7:25:00 PM
Words that are deep, and yet somehow words of someone not wanting or waiting anymore. Depiction of live and hurt well blended. Good write meh friend.
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Date: 2/27/2018 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win here Joe! Loved the last 2 lines! That's poetic justice :)
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Date: 2/25/2018 9:54:00 AM
Wow! Joe your heartbroken laments are so emotionally and poetically expressed. Powerful and impressive. Congratulations on your fantastic win!
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Jay Vee
Date: 2/26/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Susan. I appreciate the feedback. It's been a long road.
Date: 2/24/2018 4:38:00 PM
Wow, powerful poem, Joe. Congrats on your win. Great style.
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Jay Vee
Date: 2/26/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2018 2:46:00 PM
Wow what an impressive write Joe! Congratulations on a well deserved high placement! : )
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Date: 2/24/2018 1:46:00 PM
Great write, great rhymes Joe, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 2/15/2018 12:55:00 PM
Hello Joe, I am so glad that you closed the door. She is not meant for you. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/13/2018 3:43:00 PM
Great write Joe..
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