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Lyrics In the Wind

I hear a melody floating in the wind Lyrical whispers played in F sharp as though a violin had been chinned or an angel is caressing the strings of a harp It dried the tears of willows, weeping Tickled the ears of a slumbering dream drifted past my window as tea was steeping with a love sweeter than skimmed cream

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Date: 2/26/2022 4:39:00 PM
Lovely lyrics, I especially love the second stanza Jenna the imagery is wonderful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/25/2022 5:08:00 PM
Beautifully handcrafted lyrics my friend!
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Date: 2/19/2022 12:56:00 PM
Hey hope you are ok.... nice rhymes here and signs of alliterations... so much goes with the wind....
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Date: 2/13/2022 5:45:00 AM
I love " as though a violin has been chinned" Jenna! The beautiful title sets the tone for the entire passage which I find very soothing on a raining morning!!! Happy Sunday xxoo
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Date: 2/9/2022 4:40:00 PM
Jenna, I think F sharp is my favorite key for lyrical whispers! You have composed such a musically satisfying poem depicting a fleeting moment in time that floats in dreamy serenity. Love the serene images and the great rhymes (wind/chinned was my favorite). Speaking of favorites, this is going in my faves so I can play this song again and again. Blessings to you, my friend ~ John
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Date: 2/7/2022 4:07:00 PM
Hello Jenna ... recognizing musical notes created by the wind. Very nice lyrics indeed Jenna - Lindsay
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Date: 2/5/2022 10:52:00 AM
Enjoyed, but thought you were already on a break . . . .
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2022 11:48:00 AM
A covid induced break a month ago. Thanks
Date: 2/5/2022 5:28:00 AM
I can hear the sweet sounds in your words Jenna, quite a soothing verse. Hope alls well. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2022 11:47:00 AM
ThanksTom. I’m off for a week.
Date: 2/4/2022 6:58:00 PM
Beautiful lyric, Jenna, with superb images, especially for a musician. I felt like I was there, looking out that window!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2022 7:09:00 PM
That makes me very happy. Thanks, Milt.
Date: 2/4/2022 3:14:00 PM
Loved your metaphors, Jenny. A beautiful title. Have a great week, my friend, Bill
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2022 3:33:00 PM
Thanks very much, Bill. I’m going to take a little break from ps. Stay well.

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