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Lyrics and Music

Fingers intertwined in wondrous oneness together foreverness breathtaking bliss Eye to eye in lyrical longing melodic memories soul symmetry Backs turned to bygone brokenness solitary sanctums heartbroken hibernation Face to face in aromatic anecdotes possibility potpourri enmeshed essences Voices join in rondos of rendezvous chorales of compatibility madrigals of mutuality Heart to heart in a fulcrum of fulfillment a seesaw of serendipities a trapeze of timelessness Lips engaged in passion's pendulum voluptuous vocabularies intoxicating innuendoes She is lyrics and I am music ~ harmonizing a hypnotizing love song ~ a dizzying duet of delight

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/29/2023 10:42:00 AM

Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. WOW!!! What a write. Creative/wonderful with a great ending. I love this one. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 12/14/2023 7:43:00 AM

John, your poem is a beautiful layout of emotions and experiences woven together with exquisite language and imagery. The depth of feeling and the harmonious blend of words create a captivating melody that resonates deeply. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel

Susan Lawrence

Date: 12/5/2023 9:56:00 AM

Wow John ! I love this and want to read it again right now to take in the emotion and dance of your words . A fabulous fav ! So much love and playfulness here . I could ride the wave of your heartstrings, soul symmetry, aromatic antidotes, in together foreverness ! It all sounds so beckoning and lovely . So happy to see you back again . Blessings and hugs to you . Wishing you a wondrous holiday season . Love always, Susan :)

John Watt
Date: 12/8/2023 2:55:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend for all the affirmation and the fav. I am grateful always. Big hugs ~ John

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/3/2023 4:57:00 PM

Makes me think of that lovely song 'you are the words/I am the tune, you are the sun, I am the moon/play me' - also love 'wondrous oneness' and 'seesaw of serendipty' - you write in such lyrical harmony~

John Watt
Date: 12/6/2023 8:32:00 PM

Nice Neil Diamond reference! I love that song, and can easily see it exerting a subliminal influence on this write. In a way, lyrics and music represent yin and yang to me, a concept that frequently makes its way into my writings. Thanks for the kind words. I especially appreciated "lyrical harmony".

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/2/2023 6:08:00 PM

You had me at the first stanza. A love song, I now know what a romance with a choir can be, all over again. I just bought a guitar and am eager to learn it all over again, I'd like to feel something, like you have. Warm regards, Anaya

John Watt
Date: 12/2/2023 11:17:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comment, Anaya. It may interest you that the muse for this poem is my choir director (and sweetheart)! Best wishes on your guitar journey and may your days be filled with dulcet sounds ~ John

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/30/2023 5:37:00 PM

Dear PoBro, where do I begin to exalt the soulful artistic wonders of your creative poetic finesse? I'll start at the top with the title; ingenious! It sets the tone for an exquisite lyrical love poem. Your alliteration is spectacular; just about every line! And the word pairings extraordinary; "wondrous oneness", "heartbroken hibernation", "possibility potpourri" (wow!), "seesaw of serendipities", but especially " voluptuous vocabularies" (double wow!) Your last three lines of exquisite expressive emotion make for a super grand finale! A sumptuous romance! Warmest wishes my friend.. your PS-PS

John Watt
Date: 12/2/2023 11:36:00 PM

My PS-PS, you always warm my heart with kindness and your generous brand of enthusiasm and affection. God bless you for bring me such scintillating encouragement. Your grateful PoBro

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/30/2023 12:08:00 PM

" a dizzying duet of delight," indeed, john! i love the words you've chosen in this poem...

John Watt
Date: 12/2/2023 11:18:00 PM

Thank you, ilene, your comments always make me smile ~ John