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LYRIC MAN DISILLUSIONED ME

Dee said she loved me I was pleased She wanted me I was relieved But Dee let me down I felt like a clown Turned down to be a man I peeved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/3/2015 8:06:00 PM
Nehpets.. Enjoyed your "broken heart" valentine lines.. And I congratulate you on your lovely winning limerick!
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Date: 5/30/2015 4:55:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 5/27/2015 5:16:00 PM
Nehpets, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/27/2015 10:02:00 AM
Lol, I don't even want to ask...lol cool win, Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT
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Date: 2/6/2015 11:51:00 PM
Not sure I understand your write but wish I did.. I think!?!
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:55:00 AM
Couldn't think who to write about for the contest, you came first in my head since you comment on my work quite a lot.