Lying Ways

Only one true friend would tell me,
face my anger she had feared.
I saw truth in what she told me.
You were lying through your beard.
Though it breaks my heart to leave you,
I would rather be alone
than with one who would deceive me.
With this message, I am gone.

Refrain:
There was a time that I believed it,
that your love was mine alone.
But I can’t be fooled forever.
Now my trust in you is gone.

When you find this note I’m writing,
know at once it is too late
to win back the heart that trusted.
Lying ways has sealed your fate.
And the one with whom you dallied 
breaks another’s loving heart.
By your guilt two links are broken
as more lives are torn apart.

Refrain:
There was a time that I believed it,
that your love was mine alone.
But I can’t be fooled forever.
Now my trust in you is gone.

Left now only with each other,
cheaters both well proven to be,
you can never trust each other.
Just deserts it seems to me.
Do it with you, do it to you,
lies uneasy on your mind. 
You’ll be sorry you betrayed me,
truest love you’ll ever find.

Refrain: 
There was a time that I believed it,
that your love was mine alone.
But I can’t be fooled forever.
Now my trust in you is gone.



For Paula's "Play me a cheatin' song" contest  Won 5th place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/23/2011 3:03:00 PM
very well done congrats on your win cory
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Date: 5/23/2011 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Paula, Joyce
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:09:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your super win in Paula's contest with this amazing creative write on cheating ...wow.. enjoy your wonderful win with luv..
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Date: 5/23/2011 12:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Joyce. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/23/2011 11:47:00 AM
What a great job you did with this one, Joyce! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/23/2011 11:20:00 AM
These cheating poems are great. I only hope they are all fiction based.
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Date: 5/23/2011 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2011 10:13:00 AM
Great write. Many congratulations on your win, Joyce : )
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Date: 5/23/2011 10:05:00 AM
so gut- wrenchingly beautiful, joyce... best of congrast on the dashing win! :) huggs
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Date: 5/23/2011 9:32:00 AM
Dear Joyce, congratulations on your win in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:13:00 PM
Excellent set of lyrics on how people feel when they have been betrayed by their mate. And only one person had the guts to tell her the truth! That's the way it is, Joyce. Thank you for letting me know you have a support system set up for your brother. I know you wish you could be with him all the time, but at least he'll be having visits from service providers and prayers from a loving family. Best wishes in Paula's contest, dear. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:01:00 PM
Outstanding entry, Joyce. Excellent piece. Nice going. Good luck. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Enjoy the rest of your week. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/17/2011 7:31:00 AM
Nicely constructed and very lyrical. The refrain rolls so smoothly, it could easily be set to music. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 5/17/2011 7:07:00 AM
I am so pleased to have had the pleasure to read your amazing poetry this morning Joyce. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hoping you have a week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 8:06:00 PM
i know what this feels like..it hurts so much..to be cheated on...you never really heal from it you know...some men can be real scumbags..calling women the same nicknames, using the same lines..unbelievable when you catch them...it hurts..I am glad I have a good man that worships the ground I walk on and would never do either thing..he calls me "boss" or lady boss...LOL...yeah right..submissiveness rules here..
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Date: 5/16/2011 7:06:00 PM
very nicely done!! nice to see you are back! have a great night and sweet dreams! good luck in the contest. cory
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