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Lusty Louise

The lusty octopus Louise Loved giving young sailors the squeeze With her tentacles great She could satisfy eight Leaving all hands on deck with large hickeys

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James Fraser

Date: 3/14/2010 4:16:00 PM

Ha ha, made me chuckle Thomas >> James

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/7/2010 10:35:00 PM

Very funny,:)tnks for stopping by..im glad my fingertips led me here to start my day..Charma:)

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/6/2010 1:22:00 AM

Very entertaining, a fun loving limerick. Appreciate your kind words to my haiku, Thomas. (^_^) Noel.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/4/2010 3:01:00 PM

I really enjoyed this one Tom. Sure beat the heck out of mine because it is really amusing. Thanks for your nice comments. Blessings, Connie

Joanna Smith

Date: 3/4/2010 2:30:00 PM

lol i loved this i hope you entered it in the fake person contest this surely won right?with such a great laugh for everyone! Jo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:39:00 PM

This was quite good. Gosh, no win?? I think it should have won something. LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/3/2010 11:09:00 AM

funny, enjoyed

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2010 9:41:00 PM

Funny and cool Thomas.. don't know if u placed it in the contest or not but its over now but this Limerick will go on and on into my favorites.. luv.. and thankxxx for enjoying my poetry tonigh..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Daver Austin

Date: 3/2/2010 2:39:00 PM

Great limerick. We used to know lots of limericks back in the 1940's when I was in high school, most of them just plain raunchy. Yours, however, is great without being obscene. Keep writing. I am enjoying mucho. BIG LOVE, daver