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Lusty Louise

The lusty octopus Louise
Loved giving young sailors the squeeze

With her tentacles great
She could satisfy eight

Leaving all hands on deck with large hickeys

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James Fraser

March 14, 2010 at 4:16 PM

Ha ha, made me chuckle Thomas >> James

Charmaine Chircop

March 7, 2010 at 10:35 PM

Very funny,:)tnks for stopping by..im glad my fingertips led me here to start my day..Charma:)

Noel Villarosa

March 6, 2010 at 1:22 AM

Very entertaining, a fun loving limerick. Appreciate your kind words to my haiku, Thomas. (^_^) Noel.

Connie Marcum Wong

March 4, 2010 at 3:01 PM

I really enjoyed this one Tom. Sure beat the heck out of mine because it is really amusing. Thanks for your nice comments. Blessings, Connie

Joanna Smith

March 4, 2010 at 2:30 PM

lol i loved this i hope you entered it in the fake person contest this surely won right?with such a great laugh for everyone! Jo

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2010 at 1:39 PM

This was quite good. Gosh, no win?? I think it should have won something. LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

March 3, 2010 at 11:09 AM

funny, enjoyed

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 2, 2010 at 9:41 PM

Funny and cool Thomas.. don't know if u placed it in the contest or not but its over now but this Limerick will go on and on into my favorites.. luv.. and thankxxx for enjoying my poetry tonigh..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Daver Austin

March 2, 2010 at 2:39 PM

Great limerick. We used to know lots of limericks back in the 1940's when I was in high school, most of them just plain raunchy. Yours, however, is great without being obscene. Keep writing. I am enjoying mucho. BIG LOVE, daver