Luster Of Love


Not placed in contest "Musings of love"


In the verdant vale of my heart, 
contoured by dormant desire, 
I carved a craving channel to reach you.
The cloud of yearning melted 
in mesmeric torrent of craving,
made a spellbound stream 
gliding past me ebullient, 
I swam under the hypnotic sky. 
In the current of your charisma, 
my senses surged through 
the mystique moonshine aura
with the sequined lattice of love. 

Spring departed as the season turned, 
gave me a gorgeous gift,
a red rose posy of your heart, 
resplendent with the patina of love, 
in the summer of discontent, 
I didn’t let it wither.

In midsummer nebulous night, 
under the star-studded sapphire sky, 
you were with me lying
on the passion bank of the ravishing river, 
soaked the satin stardust of longing,
where in the vivacious vase of my heart 
the roses you could see 
radiate the fervor of my lustrous love. 

The ardent music of fantasy I composed,
tuned to the mesmerizing melody 
of the serenading sensuous stream,
weaved with its lyric in your entranced eyes 
the tapestry of my dream.

When my golden garden gleamed 
with the eventide’s halcyon hues,
you embellished my rose buds of rapture,
that in your enticed eyes I saw unfurl  
with the lilting luster of love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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La France Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem, Constance
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 10:46 PM
Many thanks, Constance for the placement.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away.........................
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 10:46 PM
Thank you, Paula.
Fowler Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 3:11 PM
A beautiful win Subimal. Congratulations! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 11:12 PM
Thank you, Linda.
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