Winged Warrior Poet Choka

Lust

LUST

flesh screaming of sin
found pleasures deepening skin
raising body heat within

escaping passion
carnal knowledge attraction
attaining satisfaction

volcanic fluxion
viral viewing  seduction
stimulating consumption

sexual craving
concupiscence behaving
eroticism enslaving

magic hypnotic
display actions exotic
thirst and hunger demonic




5-7-7 Syllable count

...can also be read backward~just saying


Music by Ariana Grande - 'Dangerous Woman'


Oct.15.2018
One of The Seven Deadly Sins
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 


Placed 1'st
[7'th of 15]

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Line Gauthier November 11, 2018 at 1:46 PM Well penned, WW. Congrats on your top[ win.

Susan Palli November 7, 2018 at 12:30 PM Very clever write, W.W. Shows who is behind the deadly temptation’s trap.

Deb Radke November 6, 2018 at 8:21 PM Congratulations on this well-done poem. I've read it several times (just haven't had time to comment) and appreciate it more each time. I do like the skill you've incorporated making it readable both from the first line down and from the last line up. I'm not sure which way I like it best, but know I like it very much. It takes courage to write as this. My best. Deb

Brandy Nicole November 6, 2018 at 6:19 PM Lust wins!! Well, it does in this case. It does most of the time, if we are not careful. Just saying. To be in Lust or Love, that is the question? Congratulations Winged Warrior, on this win. Love and more Love :) Brandy

Edward Ibeh November 6, 2018 at 3:54 PM Thanks for participating in my contest, WW! A well-crafted, phenomenal poem! Congratulations on your top win!

Vladislav Raven October 24, 2018 at 4:53 PM Hi John, best wishes for this wonderful sensual write on the deadly sin of lust. Well, the heat is on my friend. Reads like a winner. You know how to raise the temperature my friend. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike. A Fave

Gershon Wolf October 18, 2018 at 8:33 PM Whoa, turn up the heat, why don't you?! (LOL!) Good luck with this one! ~ Gershon

Charlie Smith October 17, 2018 at 11:16 AM "Sin of Screaming Flesh", I think I like it even better backwards, well done my friend...

Brandy Nicole October 15, 2018 at 9:15 PM Mmm, those wet kisses. Very dangerous indeed, or perhaps they are exciting. :) Just saying. It seems as the temps begin to drop slightly lower outside- the heat becomes steamy inside- the soup bowl. :) Love and Lust my Winged Warrior. ~ Brandy

Nette Onclaud October 15, 2018 at 4:24 PM powerful poem depicting man's tendencies for immediate gratification, jo.. salute!..huggs

Susan Ashley October 15, 2018 at 2:14 PM Wow! My crazy bro bro, such dynamic and dramatic lusty verses, either way one reads it.. I love it and the Unicorns love the use of the word; 'concupiscence'.. they would have said so themselves but their hooves hinder their typing.. lol! Superb poetry on one of the deadly sins, my wicked sib. Best wishes for a win.. the sane sib of the trio of madness.. lol!

Vijay Pandit October 15, 2018 at 1:25 PM Apt music to go with your theme..well depicted for maximum impact..a win for you, WW.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2018 at 12:51 PM - WooooW .... :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green October 15, 2018 at 11:11 AM Nice and steamy and so artistically done my friend. Bravo.

Carolyn Devonshire October 15, 2018 at 10:54 AM Wow, these are terrific, Winged Warrior! Each verse ads to the dramatic effect beautifully. I'm sending you a Soup mail. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn