Lust

LUST flesh screaming of sin found pleasures deepening skin raising body heat within escaping passion carnal knowledge attraction attaining satisfaction volcanic fluxion viral viewing seduction stimulating consumption sexual craving concupiscence behaving eroticism enslaving magic hypnotic display actions exotic thirst and hunger demonic 5-7-7 Syllable count ...can also be read backward~just saying Music by Ariana Grande - 'Dangerous Woman' Oct.15.2018 One of The Seven Deadly Sins Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Placed 1'st [7'th of 15]

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/11/2018 1:46:00 PM

Well penned, WW. Congrats on your top[ win.

Susan Palli

Date: 11/7/2018 12:30:00 PM

Very clever write, W.W. Shows who is behind the deadly temptation’s trap.

Deb Radke

Date: 11/6/2018 8:21:00 PM

Congratulations on this well-done poem. I've read it several times (just haven't had time to comment) and appreciate it more each time. I do like the skill you've incorporated making it readable both from the first line down and from the last line up. I'm not sure which way I like it best, but know I like it very much. It takes courage to write as this. My best. Deb

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/6/2018 6:19:00 PM

Lust wins!! Well, it does in this case. It does most of the time, if we are not careful. Just saying. To be in Lust or Love, that is the question? Congratulations Winged Warrior, on this win. Love and more Love :) Brandy

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/6/2018 3:54:00 PM

Thanks for participating in my contest, WW! A well-crafted, phenomenal poem! Congratulations on your top win!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/24/2018 4:53:00 PM

Hi John, best wishes for this wonderful sensual write on the deadly sin of lust. Well, the heat is on my friend. Reads like a winner. You know how to raise the temperature my friend. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike. A Fave

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/18/2018 8:33:00 PM

Whoa, turn up the heat, why don't you?! (LOL!) Good luck with this one! ~ Gershon

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/17/2018 11:16:00 AM

"Sin of Screaming Flesh", I think I like it even better backwards, well done my friend...

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/15/2018 9:15:00 PM

Mmm, those wet kisses. Very dangerous indeed, or perhaps they are exciting. :) Just saying. It seems as the temps begin to drop slightly lower outside- the heat becomes steamy inside- the soup bowl. :) Love and Lust my Winged Warrior. ~ Brandy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2018 4:24:00 PM

powerful poem depicting man's tendencies for immediate gratification, jo.. salute!..huggs

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/15/2018 2:14:00 PM

Wow! My crazy bro bro, such dynamic and dramatic lusty verses, either way one reads it.. I love it and the Unicorns love the use of the word; 'concupiscence'.. they would have said so themselves but their hooves hinder their typing.. lol! Superb poetry on one of the deadly sins, my wicked sib. Best wishes for a win.. the sane sib of the trio of madness.. lol!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/15/2018 1:25:00 PM

Apt music to go with your theme..well depicted for maximum impact..a win for you, WW.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/15/2018 12:51:00 PM

- WooooW .... :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/15/2018 11:11:00 AM

Nice and steamy and so artistically done my friend. Bravo.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/15/2018 10:54:00 AM

Wow, these are terrific, Winged Warrior! Each verse ads to the dramatic effect beautifully. I'm sending you a Soup mail. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn