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Lust

LUST

flesh screaming of sin
found pleasures deepening skin
raising body heat within

escaping passion
carnal knowledge attraction
attaining satisfaction

volcanic fluxion
viral viewing  seduction
stimulating consumption

sexual craving
concupiscence behaving
eroticism enslaving

magic hypnotic
display actions exotic
thirst and hunger demonic




5-7-7 Syllable count

...can also be read backward~just saying


Music by Ariana Grande - 'Dangerous Woman'


Oct.15.2018
One of The Seven Deadly Sins
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 


Placed 1'st
[7'th of 15]

Copyright © Winged Warrior | Year Posted 2018

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Line Gauthier Date: 11/11/2018 1:46:00 PM Well penned, WW. Congrats on your top[ win. Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 11/7/2018 12:30:00 PM Very clever write, W.W. Shows who is behind the deadly temptation’s trap. Login to Reply

Deb Radke Date: 11/6/2018 8:21:00 PM Congratulations on this well-done poem. I've read it several times (just haven't had time to comment) and appreciate it more each time. I do like the skill you've incorporated making it readable both from the first line down and from the last line up. I'm not sure which way I like it best, but know I like it very much. It takes courage to write as this. My best. Deb Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 11/6/2018 6:19:00 PM Lust wins!! Well, it does in this case. It does most of the time, if we are not careful. Just saying. To be in Lust or Love, that is the question? Congratulations Winged Warrior, on this win. Love and more Love :) Brandy Login to Reply

Edward Ibeh Date: 11/6/2018 3:54:00 PM Thanks for participating in my contest, WW! A well-crafted, phenomenal poem! Congratulations on your top win! Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 10/24/2018 4:53:00 PM Hi John, best wishes for this wonderful sensual write on the deadly sin of lust. Well, the heat is on my friend. Reads like a winner. You know how to raise the temperature my friend. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike. A Fave Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/18/2018 8:33:00 PM Whoa, turn up the heat, why don't you?! (LOL!) Good luck with this one! ~ Gershon Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 10/17/2018 11:16:00 AM "Sin of Screaming Flesh", I think I like it even better backwards, well done my friend... Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 10/15/2018 9:15:00 PM Mmm, those wet kisses. Very dangerous indeed, or perhaps they are exciting. :) Just saying. It seems as the temps begin to drop slightly lower outside- the heat becomes steamy inside- the soup bowl. :) Love and Lust my Winged Warrior. ~ Brandy Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/15/2018 4:24:00 PM powerful poem depicting man's tendencies for immediate gratification, jo.. salute!..huggs Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 10/15/2018 2:14:00 PM Wow! My crazy bro bro, such dynamic and dramatic lusty verses, either way one reads it.. I love it and the Unicorns love the use of the word; 'concupiscence'.. they would have said so themselves but their hooves hinder their typing.. lol! Superb poetry on one of the deadly sins, my wicked sib. Best wishes for a win.. the sane sib of the trio of madness.. lol! Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/15/2018 1:25:00 PM Apt music to go with your theme..well depicted for maximum impact..a win for you, WW. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/15/2018 12:51:00 PM - WooooW .... :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 10/15/2018 11:11:00 AM Nice and steamy and so artistically done my friend. Bravo. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/15/2018 10:54:00 AM Wow, these are terrific, Winged Warrior! Each verse ads to the dramatic effect beautifully. I'm sending you a Soup mail. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn Login to Reply