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Lust

Her stage is set   lighting casts a soothing glow he flirts and fantasizes   his desires will soon be known   a game, a tease, each other pleads playing as they please until both bored you see   tossed aside with yesterday's ride real hearts relegated to cry waiting and withering within reality   lust just a fake faux pas so seemingly innocent requesting of peace for pause   herein lies love without feelings an euphoric exhilaration   not explained to the weak   driven and determined foraged but not forgiven in a monolithic multiple personality twist

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/8/2018 8:57:00 AM
Ahh, it s a really lovely and deep poem, really enjoyed reading it, the lust is temporarily with the pwriod of time it will finish from one person and you ll lust for other, but love is permanent, in it body or face doesn t matter, the thing which matters is soul and even decades later you ll find that person attractive, only if you truly love that person, a really nice written poem
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Date: 5/6/2018 9:56:00 AM
Hello Tim!! This one is a true treat to read. I read this one over and over again. A little lust never hurt anyone, eh?? Best Always, Gary
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Date: 5/5/2018 7:45:00 AM
My brain is twisting with delight.
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Date: 5/4/2018 6:50:00 PM
Even with the obvious difference between the words, monolithic and multiple, the last verse works. Nicely done, Tim.
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Date: 5/4/2018 3:24:00 PM
Brilliantly penned with great alliteration Tim, a vivid description of lust - love the lines 'tossed aside with yesterday's ride real hearts relegated to cry waiting and withering within reality':-) hugs Jan xx
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