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Lush Luscious Lips

Lush
Ruby
Kissable
Her sensual
Lips

Lanterne Contest
Sponsored by Broken Wings

04~07~17

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2017

bodysensuallanterne

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November 13, 2017 at 9:21 PM

You kissed a girl? Sorry, my first thought. I should say, great job with the form, I mean, it is true, but no, my reaction was the girl thing. Don't mind me, I'm just trying to catch up. (catch up? think on it. Can you catch up, literally, I mean? I'm getting tired and showing it) CayCay

November 14, 2017 at 4:43 AM

You've got me singing that I kissed a girl song now lol:-) hugs jan xx

May 21, 2017 at 12:37 PM

Congratulations, Jan, on a quick sensual lantern!

May 22, 2017 at 2:19 PM

Thanks Ralph, maybe this will inspire me to finish my poem with you!!!:-) hugs jan xx

May 18, 2017 at 12:23 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan. It's a luscious poem for passionate lovers. I love how you have expressed it with sensuality. Keep on creating great poetry. Best Wishes for health & happiness. Hugs, Andrew.

May 20, 2017 at 12:08 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Andrew:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

May 16, 2017 at 5:45 PM

Nicely done with him, Jan. Mine didn't make it!! Congrats to you.

May 16, 2017 at 5:47 PM

I was amazed to be on the list Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

May 16, 2017 at 5:44 PM

The light of romance, desire shines from this piece of yours Jan...who needs a lantern? Congrats.

May 16, 2017 at 5:48 PM

thanks Reason:-) hugs Jan xx

May 16, 2017 at 4:15 PM

Jan, my second daughter has lucious lips, so I love your lanterne. (sounds like laterine doesn't it?) Congratulations.

May 16, 2017 at 5:48 PM

lol Jean I will think of a lush lovely latrine now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

May 16, 2017 at 1:59 PM

Hey, another win for your great Lanterne!! Well done! Regards, John.

May 16, 2017 at 3:14 PM

Thanks John I am absolutely delighted to be on the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx

April 12, 2017 at 7:17 PM

Congrats on a great win Jan

April 12, 2017 at 7:19 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

April 12, 2017 at 6:00 PM

Those sensual luscious lips can not fail to attract and tempt, Jan! Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul

April 12, 2017 at 6:48 PM

I'm really delighted with my placement Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

April 12, 2017 at 1:14 PM

Jan congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful sensual Lanterne. I love it.

April 12, 2017 at 6:47 PM

Thanks so much Constance I am delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

April 12, 2017 at 1:06 PM

Cute, Jan, somehow pink would not leave the same impact, would it? Great lanturne, congrats.

April 12, 2017 at 6:47 PM

Thanks Reason I agree it needed to be ruby:-) hugs jan xx

Poetprentice Dupins

April 12, 2017 at 12:26 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan! Peace and love.

April 12, 2017 at 12:27 PM

Thanks so much poet:-) hugs Jan xx

April 12, 2017 at 7:32 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan, it's amazing.

April 12, 2017 at 7:38 AM

Thanks Roy I've one written one or two before it was great to try this form again:-) hugs jan xx

April 12, 2017 at 6:57 AM

coming back with congrats.

April 12, 2017 at 7:38 AM

Many thanks Agnes - loved your blog it is lovely to see you so active on soup:-) hugs Jan xx

April 10, 2017 at 11:16 PM

very nice,, a winner,, Hugs

April 11, 2017 at 1:18 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr.

April 10, 2017 at 7:26 PM

Very desirable pic, and an even more seductive lanterne, Jan. Beautiful work all the way around. Your shorthand poetry is sooo good. A 7! Love and smiles to you.

April 11, 2017 at 12:20 PM

aww thanks Freddie I am more known for my humour but I do surprise folks with a more serious poem:-) hugs jan xx

April 10, 2017 at 10:23 AM

Hmmm, I wouldn't use that much lipstick, ha ha:) great Lanterne, Jan:)

April 10, 2017 at 11:13 AM

nor me Jo lol:-) hugs Jan xx

April 9, 2017 at 4:37 PM

Wow..now 'that' is imagery..lol I quite like the lanterne form and your words fit wonderfully Jan:) Terrific writingxxx

April 9, 2017 at 4:42 PM

I've written few of this form but loved the prompt Constance gave to inspire us:-) hugs Jan xx

April 9, 2017 at 12:24 PM

Great lanterne Jan. Good luck in the contest. I love it!

April 9, 2017 at 4:41 PM

aww thanks again my friend :-) hugs Jan xx

April 8, 2017 at 7:45 PM

Nice Lanterne Jan...hugs

April 9, 2017 at 4:40 AM

Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx

Suzanne Delaney

April 8, 2017 at 6:13 PM

You certainly nailed this one with this ruby pair of lips. Good Luck in the contest. Hugs, SuZ

April 8, 2017 at 6:16 PM

Thanks Suz:-) hugs Jan xx

April 8, 2017 at 9:16 AM

I like this one - especially the alliteration in the title. Good luck with the contest!!

April 8, 2017 at 12:18 PM

Thanks John I enjoyed the challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2017 at 8:35 PM

well PLAYED> I better get moving on this one!!!

April 8, 2017 at 3:53 AM

I am sure you will write a beauty!:-) hugs jan xx

April 7, 2017 at 7:59 PM

oh la la, turn off the lantern!!!!

April 8, 2017 at 3:52 AM

ha ha ha I was inspired by yours :-):-) hugs jan xx

April 7, 2017 at 6:12 PM

oh, nice one. Love the alliteration in the title. Good luck in the contest, Jan.

April 7, 2017 at 6:13 PM

Thanks Agnes I've only written a couple of this form I do enjoy the challenge of these contests:-) hugs Jan xx

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