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Lush Ruby Kissable Her sensual Lips Lanterne Contest Sponsored by Broken Wings 04~07~17

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/13/2017 9:21:00 PM

You kissed a girl? Sorry, my first thought. I should say, great job with the form, I mean, it is true, but no, my reaction was the girl thing. Don't mind me, I'm just trying to catch up. (catch up? think on it. Can you catch up, literally, I mean? I'm getting tired and showing it) CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2017 4:43:00 AM

You've got me singing that I kissed a girl song now lol:-) hugs jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/21/2017 12:37:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan, on a quick sensual lantern!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2017 2:19:00 PM

Thanks Ralph, maybe this will inspire me to finish my poem with you!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Andrew Crisci

Date: 5/18/2017 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan. It's a luscious poem for passionate lovers. I love how you have expressed it with sensuality. Keep on creating great poetry. Best Wishes for health & happiness. Hugs, Andrew.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2017 12:08:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Andrew:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2017 5:45:00 PM

Nicely done with him, Jan. Mine didn't make it!! Congrats to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2017 5:47:00 PM

I was amazed to be on the list Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/16/2017 5:44:00 PM

The light of romance, desire shines from this piece of yours Jan...who needs a lantern? Congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2017 5:48:00 PM

thanks Reason:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 5/16/2017 4:15:00 PM

Jan, my second daughter has lucious lips, so I love your lanterne. (sounds like laterine doesn't it?) Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2017 5:48:00 PM

lol Jean I will think of a lush lovely latrine now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

John Michaels

Date: 5/16/2017 1:59:00 PM

Hey, another win for your great Lanterne!! Well done! Regards, John.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2017 3:14:00 PM

Thanks John I am absolutely delighted to be on the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 4/12/2017 7:17:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 7:19:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2017 6:00:00 PM

Those sensual luscious lips can not fail to attract and tempt, Jan! Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 6:48:00 PM

I'm really delighted with my placement Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 4/12/2017 1:14:00 PM

Jan congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful sensual Lanterne. I love it.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 6:47:00 PM

Thanks so much Constance I am delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/12/2017 1:06:00 PM

Cute, Jan, somehow pink would not leave the same impact, would it? Great lanturne, congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 6:47:00 PM

Thanks Reason I agree it needed to be ruby:-) hugs jan xx

Poetprentice Dupins

Date: 4/12/2017 12:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan! Peace and love.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 12:27:00 PM

Thanks so much poet:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 4/12/2017 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan, it's amazing.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 7:38:00 AM

Thanks Roy I've one written one or two before it was great to try this form again:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/12/2017 6:57:00 AM

coming back with congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 7:38:00 AM

Many thanks Agnes - loved your blog it is lovely to see you so active on soup:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 4/10/2017 11:16:00 PM

very nice,, a winner,, Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/11/2017 1:18:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/10/2017 7:26:00 PM

Very desirable pic, and an even more seductive lanterne, Jan. Beautiful work all the way around. Your shorthand poetry is sooo good. A 7! Love and smiles to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/11/2017 12:20:00 PM

aww thanks Freddie I am more known for my humour but I do surprise folks with a more serious poem:-) hugs jan xx