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Lush Ruby Kissable Her sensual Lips Lanterne Contest Sponsored by Broken Wings 04~07~17

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Date: 11/13/2017 9:21:00 PM
You kissed a girl? Sorry, my first thought. I should say, great job with the form, I mean, it is true, but no, my reaction was the girl thing. Don't mind me, I'm just trying to catch up. (catch up? think on it. Can you catch up, literally, I mean? I'm getting tired and showing it) CayCay
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Date: 11/14/2017 4:43:00 AM
You've got me singing that I kissed a girl song now lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/21/2017 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Jan, on a quick sensual lantern!
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Date: 5/22/2017 2:19:00 PM
Thanks Ralph, maybe this will inspire me to finish my poem with you!!!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/18/2017 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan. It's a luscious poem for passionate lovers. I love how you have expressed it with sensuality. Keep on creating great poetry. Best Wishes for health & happiness. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 5/20/2017 12:08:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Andrew:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/16/2017 5:45:00 PM
Nicely done with him, Jan. Mine didn't make it!! Congrats to you.
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Date: 5/16/2017 5:47:00 PM
I was amazed to be on the list Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/16/2017 5:44:00 PM
The light of romance, desire shines from this piece of yours Jan...who needs a lantern? Congrats.
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Date: 5/16/2017 5:48:00 PM
thanks Reason:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/16/2017 4:15:00 PM
Jan, my second daughter has lucious lips, so I love your lanterne. (sounds like laterine doesn't it?) Congratulations.
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Date: 5/16/2017 5:48:00 PM
lol Jean I will think of a lush lovely latrine now lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/16/2017 1:59:00 PM
Hey, another win for your great Lanterne!! Well done! Regards, John.
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Date: 5/16/2017 3:14:00 PM
Thanks John I am absolutely delighted to be on the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/12/2017 7:17:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Jan
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Date: 4/12/2017 7:19:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/12/2017 6:00:00 PM
Those sensual luscious lips can not fail to attract and tempt, Jan! Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul
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Date: 4/12/2017 6:48:00 PM
I'm really delighted with my placement Paul:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/12/2017 1:14:00 PM
Jan congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful sensual Lanterne. I love it.
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Date: 4/12/2017 6:47:00 PM
Thanks so much Constance I am delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/12/2017 1:06:00 PM
Cute, Jan, somehow pink would not leave the same impact, would it? Great lanturne, congrats.
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Date: 4/12/2017 6:47:00 PM
Thanks Reason I agree it needed to be ruby:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/12/2017 12:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jan! Peace and love.
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Date: 4/12/2017 12:27:00 PM
Thanks so much poet:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/12/2017 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan, it's amazing.
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Date: 4/12/2017 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Roy I've one written one or two before it was great to try this form again:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/12/2017 6:57:00 AM
coming back with congrats.
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Date: 4/12/2017 7:38:00 AM
Many thanks Agnes - loved your blog it is lovely to see you so active on soup:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/10/2017 11:16:00 PM
very nice,, a winner,, Hugs
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Date: 4/11/2017 1:18:00 PM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/10/2017 7:26:00 PM
Very desirable pic, and an even more seductive lanterne, Jan. Beautiful work all the way around. Your shorthand poetry is sooo good. A 7! Love and smiles to you.
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Date: 4/11/2017 12:20:00 PM
aww thanks Freddie I am more known for my humour but I do surprise folks with a more serious poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/10/2017 10:23:00 AM
Hmmm, I wouldn't use that much lipstick, ha ha:) great Lanterne, Jan:)
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Date: 4/10/2017 11:13:00 AM
nor me Jo lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2017 4:37:00 PM
Wow..now 'that' is imagery..lol I quite like the lanterne form and your words fit wonderfully Jan:) Terrific writingxxx
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Date: 4/9/2017 4:42:00 PM
I've written few of this form but loved the prompt Constance gave to inspire us:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2017 12:24:00 PM
Great lanterne Jan. Good luck in the contest. I love it!
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Date: 4/9/2017 4:41:00 PM
aww thanks again my friend :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/8/2017 7:45:00 PM
Nice Lanterne Jan...hugs
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Date: 4/9/2017 4:40:00 AM
Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/8/2017 6:13:00 PM
You certainly nailed this one with this ruby pair of lips. Good Luck in the contest. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 4/8/2017 6:16:00 PM
Thanks Suz:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/8/2017 9:16:00 AM
I like this one - especially the alliteration in the title. Good luck with the contest!!
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Date: 4/8/2017 12:18:00 PM
Thanks John I enjoyed the challenge:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 8:35:00 PM
well PLAYED> I better get moving on this one!!!
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Date: 4/8/2017 3:53:00 AM
I am sure you will write a beauty!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 7:59:00 PM
oh la la, turn off the lantern!!!!
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Date: 4/8/2017 3:52:00 AM
ha ha ha I was inspired by yours :-):-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 6:12:00 PM
oh, nice one. Love the alliteration in the title. Good luck in the contest, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/7/2017 6:13:00 PM
Thanks Agnes I've only written a couple of this form I do enjoy the challenge of these contests:-) hugs Jan xx
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