Lured By the Serpent's Astuteness

Second creation of delicate flesh,
lured by the Serpent's astuteness,
why did you promptly reach for that apple
and invited me to taste it and eat it all?


Linda, didn't God warn you to keep away from that tree?
Woman, once so sinless, beautiful and full of liberty:
you brought ruin to our sun-illuminated Paradise;
now storms rage and meadows are stripped of all flowers.


Our Creator took a rib from my body with good intention,
to give you life and companionship, and make you my possession:
bearing from your womb many children...multiplying in due time,
but His plan couldn't be brought to completion with a cunning lie.


Because of you disobedience and my weakness to swiftly accept, 
we are eternally punished to roam our earth without finding soothing rest;
and the eternal curse will hinder us from being happy and being protected,  
and with hot sweat, plowing the hard soil, I must earn our bread.


Dedicated to Marilyn for her beautiful heart and gentle soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 1:22 PM
Many congratulations Andrew on your fine win in Linda-Marie's contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 5:22 PM
Congrats on the win
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Congrats Andrew on your success in my ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 5:43 PM
hey, dontcha know, if she hadn't eaten that apple, you never would have done the deed and had kids and lived to understand life? Anyway, that's how i see it, but this was very good writing, Andrew, I enjoyed reading it. LUv, andrea
La France Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 9:04 PM
well, written, darn that apple!! Best of luck in the contest
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May 23, 2010 at 11:15 AM
This poem has all the elements that make Genesis my favorite part of the Bible. Man's failure to obey God's law continues to cause trepidation to this day, Andrew. We have been gnawing on the apple since the dawn of creation. Brilliant writing once again! Thank you for sharing. Love, Carolyn
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