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Lure of Glistening Dew

Written: January 26, 2025 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the pale autumn sun, a radiant shimmer thrives, A solitary strand, a seascape draped in misty gray. The sand speaks of endless days, Where waves roll unfazed by the arrival of winter’s chill. I trudge through remnants of slithering worms stripped of flesh, Barely finding magic in the comforting shade. Galumphing creatures in the glade, While rainbows blend on nature's fresh palette. From dreams, we drift to hammock swings, Crisp leaves whisper tales of desolation streaks. Bleeding wrists find bleak solace, Glistening dew on the tumbling decline beckons. A chasm stretches wide, where sharp truths pierce, the careless stumble of losing grip on the damp ground. Echoes of forever cram the night air, juggling stormy clouds with an enveloping shroud. Wandering among orchids mimics twilight’s flame, as paths are carved, straddling the colossal vastness of darkness Buzzing, zooming, whispers aside, and candles illuminate life’s esoteric game. Singing goldfinches chirp from their yellow celandine perch. Purple crocuses shimmer beneath the magenta sky. Riddles dance upon the sapphire sea tides.

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Date: 1/31/2025 3:23:00 PM
SP, I noticed a few lines that refer to things that seem less than perfection...like sharp truths pierce and bleeding wrists. You're making me think of the lure of dew and that sometimes is masks what we may not feel great about. Interesting to read and to ponder. It reminds me of life itself!! Smiles!!
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Date: 1/29/2025 3:41:00 AM
Ah i love the way youv painted imagery here from hammock swings to sapphire sea tides and so much more, left me mesmerized from the very first line to the end! I love the way youv used alliterations and flow of your lines here is so impeccable and so very artistic as always! I especially love how youv written "trudge through remnants of slithering worms stripped of flesh, Barely finding magic in the comforting shade. " so much depth in this lines! As always it is a pleasure reading you
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Date: 1/28/2025 1:39:00 PM
Such a beautifully written poetic piece Lassaad! You are a very gifted poet! Debx
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Date: 1/28/2025 12:48:00 PM
Great wordage, Sotto. So much imagery too.
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Date: 1/28/2025 12:07:00 PM
Sotto, you never cease to amaze us with your over-the-top metaphors and visually crafted, uplifting, creative thoughts. Thanks for the uplift! As usual, this one is above and beyond. Write on, Terrell
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Date: 1/28/2025 1:11:00 AM
Lasaad, you are such a talented poet, my friend. Your poetry is always impeccable and is a true piece of art. This is beautifully written and a pleasure to read. Hope all is well. Charlie
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Date: 1/27/2025 3:03:00 PM
this leads one into realms of golden dreams of balmy seas and beaches while birds of many hues seduce to enter deeper in a golden write Sotto keep writing them hugs Shadow
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Date: 1/27/2025 2:39:00 PM
Reads like a very nice oceanic retreat. Very descriptive and expressive work. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 1/27/2025 12:33:00 PM
I always enjoy reading your wonderful writes. You have a golden pen.... Have a fun day as you write away..................
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Date: 1/26/2025 8:08:00 PM
Enchanting and wispful imagery - I really like your style
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