Lupus

Lord my heart my heart 
I’m crying out in so much pain
My joints swelling up
My face developed butterflies a rash
I’m weak can’t move can’t get out the bed
Lord I know you don’t put no more 
No more on me than I can bare
But my skin developed ulcers and sores
The world looking at me like a circus freak
My thoughts in distress on a daily 
In and out the hospital my organs 
My body attacking my organs 
My bones breaking like paper 
Lupus attacking my bones
Lord I know we don’t suppose to question you 
But why me? Why I’m suffering?
I know everything happens for a reason
I’m a good person nobody knows
Knows my struggle know my pain
Lupus is a disease I wish go away
Lupus I pray they kill and cure you
You affecting too many people I know  
Thousands across the nations 
Destroy the souls of too many




In a loving memory of Tiffany Clark
This also for everyone who is battling this disease or is affected by the disease.
I love you in your in my daily prayers… GOD BLESS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/12/2016 12:51:00 PM
Hi Patrice, I know about this disease personally. My first cousin had Lupus. She passed away as a result of it.I appreciate you writing such a poem about it. My heart goes out to the people who suffer from it and their families. God bless: -) Alexis
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Date: 11/12/2016 12:57:00 PM
THANK YOU FOR THE FEED BACK ALEXIS I KNOW QUITE FEW PEOPLE THAT HAS LUPUS. I HATE THAT DISEASE IT DID MY BEST FRIEND TIFFANY IN. I PRAY THEY FIND A CURE EVERYDAY.
Date: 11/10/2016 11:21:00 PM
God bless you.
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 11/11/2016 12:11:00 AM
Thank you... Christy
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