Lune

The sweetest fruit Falls deeply in the river Of wondrous romance #2

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/16/2015 11:00:00 PM

Wonderful imagery James! Congrats on first place win!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/16/2015 10:14:00 PM

Beautiful write, James! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2015 8:42:00 PM

Hi James, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 8/16/2015 1:24:00 AM

James, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2015 4:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

John Lawless

Date: 8/15/2015 7:40:00 AM

A deeply sensual love poem in tree lines...excellent ...

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2015 7:24:00 AM

oh I do like your take on the image - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/15/2015 7:11:00 AM

Oh yes, wondrous romance...so nicely said, well done on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2015 12:58:00 AM

James, howdy!! Congrats for first place. Wow, I loved this one. Metaphorical for deeply in love. It's sweet as can be, that first love we remember always. In the last line, I just wanted you to have written luscious romance instead of wondrous, but that's just me!!