Lune

The sweetest fruit
Falls deeply in the river
Of wondrous romance
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 11:00 PM
Wonderful imagery James! Congrats on first place win!
Merryman Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:14 PM
Beautiful write, James! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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August 16, 2015 at 8:42 PM
Hi James, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 1:24 AM
James, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love
Roper Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 4:14 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Lawless Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:40 AM
A deeply sensual love poem in tree lines...excellent ...
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:24 AM
oh I do like your take on the image - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Nance Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Oh yes, wondrous romance...so nicely said, well done on your win :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 12:58 AM
James, howdy!! Congrats for first place. Wow, I loved this one. Metaphorical for deeply in love. It's sweet as can be, that first love we remember always. In the last line, I just wanted you to have written luscious romance instead of wondrous, but that's just me!!
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