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Luna's Pale Light

Light shimmered on the lake at moonrise, with a breathtaking view that glimmered. Beneath the glow of Luna's pale luminance, the night was calm on the banks of the firth except for the cooing of a lonesome dove, who thirsted like me, yearning to be loved. September 10, 2022 Bitesize Poem No52 Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/12/2022 7:20:00 AM

Sweet with thought Jenna. You never fail to ignite imagination! Linda

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/11/2022 1:20:00 AM

You pack a lot of imagery in a few lines Jenna, something magical about the pale moonlight that casts its eerie glow over the sea and landscape. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/11/2022 5:04:00 AM

Pale moonlight, harvest moon, it's all mysteriously beautiful to me, too. Thank you, Tom.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/10/2022 9:40:00 PM

Exceptionally well-written, Jenna. Your imagery is riveting. I thought the ending was magical... "a lonesome dove, who thirsted like me, yearning to be loved." I see this as a winner!

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/11/2022 5:03:00 AM

I'm so very glad you found this one had a 'magical' ending, Milt. Thank you very much.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 9/10/2022 12:39:00 PM

very nice imagery... you do very well with these "bite sized" ones

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/10/2022 1:40:00 PM

Thanks for the kind remarks, Jeff.