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Luna's Light

A silver path shimmers
Across the sea and leads
To you lovely Luna lady,
Clustered by Cumulus clouds
And embraced by an indigo sky,
Enchantment emanates
From your glowing eye.

Lovers wrapped in moonbeams
Reflected by the sandy shore
Share kisses in silhouette shadows
In the magic of your rising,
In the soft music of the waves,
In the beating of passionate hearts.

© 2014 Connie Marcum Wong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bordner Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Luna is a purveyor of passion born in the mystery of origin Connie. This poem is elemental romance par excellence! The moon does seem to facilitate ardor for life. I feel more awake at night Connie...J.A.B.
Hamilton Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 11:43 AM
so stirring and delightful Connie hugs
Deschler Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 11:45 PM
The magic of romance is certainly heightened beneath the silver rays of the moon.... The enchanting imagery is so lovely in this poem! Very nicely done, Connie!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 4:37 PM
Guess I could publish a book of poetry with just my Luna poems alone Kelly, but she does bring out my romantic heart. Thank you so much for this lovely comment. I appreciate it very much. Thank you! hugs, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:45 PM
for the gorgeous imagery, this one is probably the best of yours I saw today. GREAT to see three poems of yours in one day. You rock, Connie
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:59 PM
I am glad you like it Andrea. Thanks for commenting on all of them. Super nice of you. Blessings, Connie
Hamilton Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 10:29 AM
the moon always cheers me up and this is picture perfect love the picture and Connie your words really do her justice. a fav for me hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 1:44 PM
How sweet of you to fav this poem Shadow. I am a fan of your poetry and am honored. Thank you very much. Blessings, Connie
Kendrick Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 10:03 AM
The stars were brightly shining against a deep black backdrop early this morning..I am sure that the lunar effect could have happened to any lovers around..Great work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 1:43 PM
Thank you for commenting Sara. I was up before dawn myself past several days. Hugs, Connie
Mcdaid Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 8:29 AM
truly very beautifully penned connie flowed excellent in the mind
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 1:42 PM
Thank you very much Liam. I appreciate you commenting on my poem. Aloha, Connie
A. Sharma Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 6:20 AM
Wow Connie! The beauty of ur words is greater than that of the luna's ! Great work my friend!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 1:30 PM
I appreciate you commenting on my poem Dr. Upma. Thank you...Blessings, Connie
De La Luna Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 4:30 AM
oh the amorous moon...love this beautiful write, Connie!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 1:29 PM
Thank you very much. I appreciate you leaving me such a lovely comment. Blessings, Connie
Trifiatis Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 4:29 AM
Bathing in the magic light of your verse one rests spellbound, dearest Connie! A seven!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Wow, thank you so much Demetrios! I appreciate your comment very much. Blessings, Connie
Goswami Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:56 AM
I observed the real magic on the coast of Bay of Bengal...Delicious creation...I enjoyed it with my romantic vision...Thank you very much...Best wishes to you from India...
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 1:18 PM
I would love to visit India, a most romantic country where poetry resides. I enjoy watching Hindi dramas/comedies. Very nice to meet you Sandip. Thank you very much for your sweet comment on my poem. Blessings and Aloha, Connie
Rose Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 9:30 PM
Like a dream....
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 11:07 PM
Thank you Britt. I appreciate you commenting. Aloha, Connie
Gorelick Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:10 PM
sigh..Im carried away by this lovely poem. BG
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Thank you Barbara. I was lucky to find just the right picture to go with my poem. I love twilight and when the moon is full, she enchants! hugs, Connie
Meade Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:06 PM
"lovely Luna lady" love that phrase. Now on my walks at night I will greet the lovely Luna lady -- growing and shrinking, marking seasons one lover at a time. I am off to greet her now! All the best my friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:23 PM
Thank you David. May she inspire some more wonderful work from you. Aloha, Connie
May Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:54 PM
Beautiful romantic write Connie...Great imagery
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:58 PM
Thank you Joseph. Luna hanging low over the sea inspires me! Aloha, Connie
Gibson Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:25 PM
Beautiful, Connie. I love to write about the moon, the beach, the ocean...all the images you used.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:57 PM
I love to read your nature poems Faye. Thank you my friend!
Sietesantos Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:14 PM
Enchantingly beautiful!!! I love it - lovely imagery! Pandita
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:57 PM
Thank you very much Pandita. Blessings, Connie
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