Joseph May Poet Jueju

Luna's Glow

Dancing 'neath a starry sky
  With kisses sweet, lovers sigh
 Heartbeats rise in Luna's glow
 Passion's fire begins to grow
 
 Sky ablaze, each star a gem
 Sigh of wind whispers to them
 Glow of hearts, like stars above
 Grow brighter with gleams of love 

 
 3-9-19
 ''K'' Contest, New Or Old Poetry Contest
 Sponsor:  Constance La France

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Ann Gilmour April 18, 2019 at 10:38 AM Such a beautiful romantic poem Joseph you have captured the magic so well, and what could be more romantic than the stars and the moon... many congrats on your 1st place win, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Brandy Nicole April 17, 2019 at 11:28 PM Your words tangle around each other in such a beautiful way. It still takes the breath away. Congratulations Joseph, on this win. :) Brandy

Janice Canerdy April 17, 2019 at 8:48 AM CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Joseph! BEAUTIFUL! Janice

Charles Messina April 17, 2019 at 6:13 AM This is a gem, Joseph. Such a great entry for the contest. Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place win. All the best...Charlie Joseph May April 17, 2019 at 8:00 AM Thank you so much for my top placement Charles..

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2019 at 6:36 PM The pattern of this form is so clear when I look again at your poem. Why could I not see it first time I did it? Joseph May March 19, 2019 at 9:24 PM You were not the only one Andrea, A few others have overlooked it as well.

Jennifer Proxenos March 11, 2019 at 12:33 PM A great write Joseph - good luck in the contest - poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2019 at 1:34 PM Lovely one. I am excited to try this contest of charles'!

Constance La France March 10, 2019 at 11:04 AM Joseph, your poem is perfect for the contest and I love it ~

Silent One March 10, 2019 at 8:34 AM such serene imagery... Lovely lines Joseph...

Ravi Sathasivam March 10, 2019 at 1:59 AM Excellent. Well imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Brandy Nicole March 9, 2019 at 8:22 PM Oh my!!! This is breathtaking. Not sure why, but I love this thought "Sigh of wind whispers to them" Under the moon, love begins to bloom. Indeed it does, within your words. :) Brandy

Judy Ball March 9, 2019 at 3:34 PM Lovely Joseph. Nice rhythm and rhyme. Love it. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB

Vijay Pandit March 9, 2019 at 2:27 PM Beautiful rhythm and flow, Joseph..excellent imagery..a joy to read.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2019 at 2:24 PM - Beautiful, Joseph :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)