Luna's Glow

Dancing 'neath a starry sky With kisses sweet, lovers sigh Heartbeats rise in Luna's glow Passion's fire begins to grow Sky ablaze, each star a gem Sigh of wind whispers to them Glow of hearts, like stars above Grow brighter with gleams of love 3-9-19 ''K'' Contest, New Or Old Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Ann Gilmour

Date: 4/18/2019 10:38:00 AM

Such a beautiful romantic poem Joseph you have captured the magic so well, and what could be more romantic than the stars and the moon... many congrats on your 1st place win, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/17/2019 11:28:00 PM

Your words tangle around each other in such a beautiful way. It still takes the breath away. Congratulations Joseph, on this win. :) Brandy

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/17/2019 8:48:00 AM

CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Joseph! BEAUTIFUL! Janice

Charles Messina

Date: 4/17/2019 6:13:00 AM

This is a gem, Joseph. Such a great entry for the contest. Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place win. All the best...Charlie

Joseph May
Date: 4/17/2019 8:00:00 AM

Thank you so much for my top placement Charles..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2019 6:36:00 PM

The pattern of this form is so clear when I look again at your poem. Why could I not see it first time I did it?

Joseph May
Date: 3/19/2019 9:24:00 PM

You were not the only one Andrea, A few others have overlooked it as well.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/11/2019 12:33:00 PM

A great write Joseph - good luck in the contest - poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2019 1:34:00 PM

Lovely one. I am excited to try this contest of charles'!

Constance La France

Date: 3/10/2019 11:04:00 AM

Joseph, your poem is perfect for the contest and I love it ~

Silent One

Date: 3/10/2019 8:34:00 AM

such serene imagery... Lovely lines Joseph...

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/10/2019 1:59:00 AM

Excellent. Well imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/9/2019 8:22:00 PM

Oh my!!! This is breathtaking. Not sure why, but I love this thought "Sigh of wind whispers to them" Under the moon, love begins to bloom. Indeed it does, within your words. :) Brandy

Judy Ball

Date: 3/9/2019 3:34:00 PM

Lovely Joseph. Nice rhythm and rhyme. Love it. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/9/2019 2:27:00 PM

Beautiful rhythm and flow, Joseph..excellent imagery..a joy to read.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2019 2:24:00 PM

- Beautiful, Joseph :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)