Lunar Laughs

Dreaming esteeming despite reality’s limitations 
Red rendezvous with you like a blank bank check
Our rainbow love so fluid like confetti celebration
So unique so mystique a heart sparks is blessed 

Your solar smile stays hot wild 
melting any dilemma
We planted a love garden by the Nile 
despite nights crisp nights in November 

I notice you are in a lavender mood
No naysayers can dampen your day
Even when you get denim blues
You lighten loads with fuchsia faith

To love you is to try and consume
The freeness of a boisterous breeze
That rises like a hot balloon in June
Never deflates or escapes from me

I day dream of your kiss of steam
You touch my soul creating growth
Inspiring silver song and poetry
With you my life feels whole and gold

Embraces lace our bodies uniting ebonies
Creating cranberry future from the past
I giggle from your nibbles so sweet
Your response to carryon with lunar laughs

I am like sun you are like moon
We are celebrating our sky love
Like Lillie’s so thrilling smiles bloom
Turquoise touch never get enough 

Yes we be that power couple
Lasting longer despite challenges
We have love enough to double
Flexible to facilitate the balances
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Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 1:16 PM
And happy Thanksgiving
Jones Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Happy Thanksgiving
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 1:16 PM
Wow. This is so beautiful with all its clever images. I really liked the use of denim blues!
Jones Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 3:40 PM
Thanks dear!
Empress Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 12:26 PM
Dear Karen, this is so beautiful and soul warming and flows with so many emotions, i really love your artistic and musical wordplay, and how youv used colors to depict what you’ve wanted to deliver, I especially love the lines “ I am like sun you are like moon We are celebrating our sky love” awwn thats so beautiful!!! How touching! Pleasure reading you always. Sending you light always. Happy thanksgiving beautiful soul! Hope you have a nice one
Jones Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Thanks Inky and same to you!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 1:50 AM
A romantic poem where love is limitless. Loved your imagery like red rendezvous and rainbow love.
Jones Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 5:07 AM
Thanks Victor!
Anaya Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 6:05 PM
"I am like sun you are like moon We are celebrating our sky love Like Lillie’s so thrilling smiles bloom Turquoise touch never get enough" so pretty, you are charming, Karen Jones! xo ~anaya
Jones Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 6:34 PM
You are kind Anaya!
Andresen Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 6:46 AM
- When love is strong, one can withstand many challenges ... a lovely poem, Karen :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 9:50 AM
Thanks Anne—Lise!
Wolf Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 9:51 PM
I have a reader for you who will absolutely flip out for your poems. He will praise you to the skies, Karen. His name is Ray Bradbury. Unfortunately he passed away a few years ago. Pity that. ... Did you know him? He wrote 'Fahrenheit 451,' 'The Martian Chronicles,' and 'Dandelion Wine,' among other science fiction works (short novels). Seriously, he would have loved your colorful approach. Oh, well...
Jones Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 10:44 PM
Wow! What a cool compliment! Thanks Gershon!
Greenhough Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 8:12 PM
This is a lesson of love that I enjoyed. Being steady in a relationship helps to overcome hurdles, as your words show. I like the contrasts of sun and moon. It's very romantic.
Jones Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 10:43 PM
I appreciate your kind words and so glad you enjoyed it!
Tor Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Enjoyed so much Karen. I was on a trip and now I am commenting, missed your Poetry... Thanks for sharing...
Jones Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 11:42 AM
Wonderful you I hope enjoyed your trip and thanks Michael!
Gasun Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 7:27 PM
A splendid poem dear poet friend Karen. I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Jones Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 7:37 PM
Thank you Len and God bless you as well!
Beaufort Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 2:01 PM
Definitely not easy to have a long lasting relationship Karen, but it is within reach if people can accept each other and not try to change too much. It does make life more pleasant to have this experience, and you describe what it would be like adroitly! Smiles!
Jones Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 2:27 PM
I often write from my imagination as well as experiences. This one is a bit of both Duke! Hugs
Rose  Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 12:32 PM
We are celebrating our sky love, continue to celebrate this heavenly love Karen, :)
Jones Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Thanks Mystic Rose Rose!
Read Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 8:51 AM
Hi Karen, you have a vivid imagination woven together with love. xx
Jones Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Thanks John! Have a fabulous weekend! Blessings!
Meadows Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 5:39 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Jones Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 7:19 AM
Thanks Daisy!
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