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Lunar Laughs

Dreaming esteeming despite reality’s limitations Red rendezvous with you like a blank bank check Our rainbow love so fluid like confetti celebration So unique so mystique a heart sparks is blessed Your solar smile stays hot wild melting any dilemma We planted a love garden by the Nile despite nights crisp nights in November I notice you are in a lavender mood No naysayers can dampen your day Even when you get denim blues You lighten loads with fuchsia faith To love you is to try and consume The freeness of a boisterous breeze That rises like a hot balloon in June Never deflates or escapes from me I day dream of your kiss of steam You touch my soul creating growth Inspiring silver song and poetry With you my life feels whole and gold Embraces lace our bodies uniting ebonies Creating cranberry future from the past I giggle from your nibbles so sweet Your response to carryon with lunar laughs I am like sun you are like moon We are celebrating our sky love Like Lillie’s so thrilling smiles bloom Turquoise touch never get enough Yes we be that power couple Lasting longer despite challenges We have love enough to double Flexible to facilitate the balances

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Date: 11/27/2024 1:16:00 PM
Wow. This is so beautiful with all its clever images. I really liked the use of denim blues!
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/27/2024 3:40:00 PM
Thanks dear!
Date: 11/27/2024 1:16:00 PM
And happy Thanksgiving
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/27/2024 1:40:00 PM
Happy Thanksgiving
Date: 11/27/2024 12:26:00 PM
Dear Karen, this is so beautiful and soul warming and flows with so many emotions, i really love your artistic and musical wordplay, and how youv used colors to depict what you’ve wanted to deliver, I especially love the lines “ I am like sun you are like moon We are celebrating our sky love” awwn thats so beautiful!!! How touching! Pleasure reading you always. Sending you light always. Happy thanksgiving beautiful soul! Hope you have a nice one
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/27/2024 1:40:00 PM
Thanks Inky and same to you!
Date: 11/27/2024 1:50:00 AM
A romantic poem where love is limitless. Loved your imagery like red rendezvous and rainbow love.
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/27/2024 5:07:00 AM
Thanks Victor!
Date: 11/26/2024 6:05:00 PM
"I am like sun you are like moon We are celebrating our sky love Like Lillie’s so thrilling smiles bloom Turquoise touch never get enough" so pretty, you are charming, Karen Jones! xo ~anaya
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/26/2024 6:34:00 PM
You are kind Anaya!
Date: 11/24/2024 6:46:00 AM
- When love is strong, one can withstand many challenges ... a lovely poem, Karen :) - hugs
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/24/2024 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Anne—Lise!
Date: 11/23/2024 9:51:00 PM
I have a reader for you who will absolutely flip out for your poems. He will praise you to the skies, Karen. His name is Ray Bradbury. Unfortunately he passed away a few years ago. Pity that. ... Did you know him? He wrote 'Fahrenheit 451,' 'The Martian Chronicles,' and 'Dandelion Wine,' among other science fiction works (short novels). Seriously, he would have loved your colorful approach. Oh, well...
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/23/2024 10:44:00 PM
Wow! What a cool compliment! Thanks Gershon!
Date: 11/23/2024 8:12:00 PM
This is a lesson of love that I enjoyed. Being steady in a relationship helps to overcome hurdles, as your words show. I like the contrasts of sun and moon. It's very romantic.
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/23/2024 10:43:00 PM
I appreciate your kind words and so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 11/23/2024 11:30:00 AM
Enjoyed so much Karen. I was on a trip and now I am commenting, missed your Poetry... Thanks for sharing...
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/23/2024 11:42:00 AM
Wonderful you I hope enjoyed your trip and thanks Michael!
Date: 11/22/2024 7:27:00 PM
A splendid poem dear poet friend Karen. I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/22/2024 7:37:00 PM
Thank you Len and God bless you as well!
Date: 11/22/2024 2:01:00 PM
Definitely not easy to have a long lasting relationship Karen, but it is within reach if people can accept each other and not try to change too much. It does make life more pleasant to have this experience, and you describe what it would be like adroitly! Smiles!
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/22/2024 2:27:00 PM
I often write from my imagination as well as experiences. This one is a bit of both Duke! Hugs
Date: 11/22/2024 12:32:00 PM
We are celebrating our sky love, continue to celebrate this heavenly love Karen, :)
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/22/2024 1:08:00 PM
Thanks Mystic Rose Rose!
Date: 11/22/2024 8:51:00 AM
Hi Karen, you have a vivid imagination woven together with love. xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/22/2024 9:43:00 AM
Thanks John! Have a fabulous weekend! Blessings!
Date: 11/22/2024 5:39:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/22/2024 7:19:00 AM
Thanks Daisy!

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