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Luna Yearns

The wait had been long… Now the world is sound asleep Her journey begins... To glimpse her dazzling beauty- Yearning stirs as desire grows On this autumn night Luna wraps herself in clouds Sails the galaxy And descends to Crystal Lake... A phenomenon passing ~*~ Note: Moonlight Dreams Contest by Tracie 12/2011 Ist Place

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Date: 1/11/2012 6:21:00 PM
this is beautiful, Annalise. Great title for it too. Sorry if it didn't win. Luv, Andrea(oh, I just read down further and It looks like it got on the winners' list. AWesome.)
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Date: 12/24/2011 8:55:00 PM
Anna,, nice...... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
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Date: 12/20/2011 8:28:00 PM
Fine use of the tanka form. Did you win the contest? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/14/2011 3:07:00 PM
Many congratulations Annalise in Tracie's contest with this lovely little Luna journey. Have a super festive season :)
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Date: 12/6/2011 5:10:00 PM
Congrats on winning Moonli Dreams and thank you for the kind words of my poems.
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Annalise. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/4/2011 4:58:00 PM
Wonderful poem you created here, dear Annalise! Congratulations on your win! Love and Happy Holidays! iolanda
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Date: 12/4/2011 4:24:00 PM
this is quite an unusual take on the moonlight theme and it's lovely, congrats!
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:20:00 PM
Ah, you created a lovely feeling with these brilliant images, Annalise. So happy you won! Congratulations. I'd love to get your support for my contest too. Really have missed you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/4/2011 9:22:00 AM
There is a quietness about this lovely poem. Nicely done, Annalise. Happy Holidays, and thank you for your kind words throughout the year. :)
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/4/2011 3:03:00 PM
Thank you also for your kind words and support during the past year also, Carrie! And my best wishes for Happy Holidays with love!
Date: 12/4/2011 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Moonlight Dreams contest Annalise
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/4/2011 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, Bob! Have a wonderful week!!
Date: 12/3/2011 7:28:00 AM
Very, very touching. Autumn nights rule...
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Audrey Haick
Date: 12/3/2011 6:44:00 PM
Don't they? My favorite season. Thanks for the kind comment, Drake. Have a great weekend! Annalise

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