Nette Onclaud Poet Quatrain

Luna Twirls

Hammock of moon drifting like swan
to cradle night in brushed cyan
While tinsels spark on glazed lagoon
Drifting like swan... hammock of moon.

Luna twirls from rush of wind’s scent
As jasmines rise with flamed intent, 
Enthralling my eyes as blooms unfurl
In rush of wind’s scent Luna twirls.

Starlight joins with glitters of dust,
On ripples daring to combust...
The passion in my bones, dethroned
From glitters of dust, starlight joins!



Swap Quatrains. Let's See
What You've Got! 
Contest of Andrea Dietrich
*Listed as Quatrain Form

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Leon Enriquez March 17, 2014 at 9:24 PM Dear Nette: Such lovely twirls in swirling swirls; a telling world where all thoughts curl! Leon

Kelly Deschler March 11, 2014 at 5:32 PM I very much enjoyed reading this wonderful poem once again. An enchanting write, Nette! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :)

Joseph May March 9, 2014 at 12:43 PM Lovely write Nette...congrats on the win

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2014 at 11:35 AM Nette, I loved your entry. It is one of the very best for imagery. wish you had rhymed the last two lines better! this would have been in my top three. congrats on your win and Soupmail for you.

Richard Lamoureux March 9, 2014 at 10:18 AM Lovely! Congrats on your win Nette.

Monterey Sirak March 9, 2014 at 6:02 AM Your pen dances across the paper like the moon in the sky. Fantastic!

Dr.Ram Mehta March 9, 2014 at 5:03 AM Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, nette

Kayod5 Kayode March 9, 2014 at 1:32 AM A great work you did here , congrats Nette.

Juliet Ligon March 7, 2014 at 1:56 PM Your style is so dreamy, Nette. Always so beautiful!

Kelly Deschler March 6, 2014 at 4:17 PM I was just drawn into this enchanting poem, and I became lost in your dreamy words and imagery! This is such a beautiful write, Nette! Good luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the kind birthday wishes! :)

Lucilla Carrillo March 5, 2014 at 9:25 AM What a great poem Nette. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.... Lucilla

Darren Watson March 5, 2014 at 7:15 AM Soup certainly found a lucky star on the day you joined . Superb poem nette , good luck.

Manny Paras March 5, 2014 at 6:30 AM Terrific! I want to be exactly where you are at, cradling evening with such passion!

Russell Sivey March 4, 2014 at 10:35 PM I just love it when I see your head up in the heavens whenever you write these magnificent writes my friend! I see you got your muse going...the night with the moon and the stars...your favorite! I thoroughly loved reading these incredible poems whenever you write them! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

Tim Ryerson March 4, 2014 at 5:20 PM Ah yes, another gem about the moon I see...Are you sure you weren't a stow-away on Apollo 11? IF I live long enough and am filthy rich by then, I would love to be a passenger on one of the trips there...THAT would be a dream come true for sure...

Paul Callus March 4, 2014 at 1:53 PM Enchanting choice of words...lovely. Good luck for the contest. // paul

Eileen Manassian March 4, 2014 at 12:59 PM Your writes are always full of celestial images that sparkle and shine.... :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2014 at 12:21 PM - This is so beautiful, Nette !!! (I had to share it with my my best friend) - Good luck in the contest!! - Have a nice evening. - oxox // Anne-Lise (not new poem today)

Kayod5 Kayode March 4, 2014 at 11:00 AM Yep,this is another win with astrological colouration,you've done the swap very well,I hope this will find the judge(s)' attention as it has arrested my.I like this Nette.Great work.Thank you for your visit to my page.

Sara Kendrick March 4, 2014 at 8:35 AM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara