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Luminescence

Only going around the moon, where to the eclipse I feed homage to keep my heart in my fingers; there pallor in the empiricism of burning conscience lifts to look on a dark spot— in the hallways of my soul. My thought would be alone inside— the polished floor with broken frames. Couldn't I stand unappalled for my scars, then absolute them in ocean salt? There, walks no line... just phantasms in silver, that harvest the beauty of dreams. Within twisted vines, out of their depth— a shaded rose grows.

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Date: 9/14/2023 6:04:00 PM
Unique choice of descriptors. I like it.
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Date: 9/14/2023 12:27:00 PM
You have a way with ending your poems with the strongest and most creative punch lines, truly soul hitting and so creative and poetic. Loved this my friend! U are amazing
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Date: 9/13/2023 7:05:00 PM
very deep and beautiful images, specially the two last stanzas, enjoyed yann
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