Lulu

i once had a doll whose name was lulu we laughed and played till I was blue her heart as big as a cashew never did she wander from my side loved her to pieces and cut off her hair and then gave her a new hairdo t’was then I changed her name to sue POTD August 5, 2019 Submitted on August 3, 2019 for contest INVITATION TO PLAY sponsored by SHERI FRESONKE HARPER - RANKED 4TH

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/4/2019 9:10:00 PM

Hey Line...a great win for you and your dolly! congrats.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/4/2019 10:03:00 PM

Thank you, Jeanne. Most appreciated.

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 10/4/2019 8:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your fourth place win in the Invitation to Play Contest, Line. I found your form fit the poem and fit the style of play as a child, enjoyed reading it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/4/2019 10:02:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sheri. Most appreciated.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 9/1/2019 8:15:00 PM

Such a unique verse in a unique form. Congratulations on your POTD honor Line, it is well deserved.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2019 10:11:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra. Most appreciated.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/12/2019 9:50:00 PM

This is such a lovely and enchanting poem, Line, in content and in shape. I especially liked your last line :) Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2019 10:00:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Susan.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 8/10/2019 10:37:00 PM

Congratulations Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2019 5:37:00 AM

Thanks, PS. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/6/2019 10:31:00 PM

This poem is simply adorable Line! Congratulations on your deserving honor of having it be POTD! : ) xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2019 7:58:00 AM

Thanks, Connie. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/6/2019 4:43:00 AM

Cute! Congrats on POTD, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2019 4:59:00 AM

Thanks, Kim.

David Adeyemo

Date: 8/6/2019 12:48:00 AM

great job

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2019 4:59:00 AM

Thanks, David.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/5/2019 6:18:00 PM

Love it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 7:27:00 PM

Thank, Timothy. much appreciated.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/5/2019 3:11:00 PM

Hi Line how clever and cute - congratulations my friend on the honour bestowed upon you of POTD. Hugs, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:06:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jennifer. Most appreciated.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/5/2019 2:42:00 PM

Hello Line,Congratulations on your POTD xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:06:00 PM

Thanks, Mike. Much appreciated.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/5/2019 2:22:00 PM

Awe, this is soooooo cute!! :) I love it. Of course you changed her name to Sue!! After cutting her hair, seems like the right thing to do. I am smiling. Congratulations Line, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:06:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Brandy.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/5/2019 2:16:00 PM

Great POD. So cute & well done. You made me laugh.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paula. Much appreciated.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/5/2019 2:15:00 PM

Back to say congratulations on POTD! Blessings, Kim

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 8/5/2019 1:22:00 PM

Many congrats on POTD Line. I love it! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:08:00 PM

Thanks, Ann. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/5/2019 1:11:00 PM

Great concert shape!!! Congratulations on POTD

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:08:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/5/2019 12:26:00 PM

A great shape poem. and what a fun play with LuluSue you had...gl in the contest and congrats on POTD.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:08:00 PM

Thanks, Jeanne. Much appreciated.

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 8/5/2019 8:33:00 AM

In a sense, all Lulus eventually turn into Sues before the Buddha's lotus feet) Great POTD. Congrats, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 9:17:00 AM

Strangely your comment makes perfect sense to me, Kurt. Thank you. LOL

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2019 8:08:00 AM

- ... funny ... and great figure, Line :))) - Let Sue get a wig ... maybe it should be blue :) - Congratulations so much on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 9:18:00 AM

Fabulous idea, Sunshine. Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Tracy Storrier

Date: 8/5/2019 7:34:00 AM

congatulations on POTD, thank you for sharing, really enjoyed this :o)

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 7:49:00 AM

Thank you, Tracy. Much appreciated.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/5/2019 7:27:00 AM

She looks like a Sue lol...Congrats!! dear friend on POTD!!...sending Raggedy-Ann kits for repair lol...^WW^ :o)

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 7:49:00 AM

Thanks, ^WW^. Much appreciated.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/5/2019 6:44:00 AM

Innovative..creative..congrats Line on poem of the day.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 7:49:00 AM

Thanks, Vijay. Much appreciated.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/5/2019 6:33:00 AM

Both Johnny Cash and the author, Shel Silverstein would be proud! Darling piece Line, you know I'm fond of clever concretes ;), Congratulations on POTD! xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 6:37:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Maureen.

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 8/5/2019 5:05:00 AM

Very creative poem Line…Congrats on POTD…Well deserved.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 6:37:00 AM

Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/5/2019 4:50:00 AM

Very creative Line, love the shape. Congrats on POTD. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 6:38:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated.