Line Gauthier Poet Concrete

Lulu

i once
had a doll
whose name
was lulu
we
laughed and
played till I was blue
her   heart as big as a   cashew
never   did she wander from my    side 
loved her to pieces
and cut off her hair
and           then
gave             her 
a new              hairdo

t’was then I changed her name to sue



AP: 3rd place 2025

POTD August 5, 2019

Submitted on August 3, 2019 for contest INVITATION TO PLAY sponsored by SHERI FRESONKE HARPER    -  RANKED 4TH

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Jeanne Mcgee October 4, 2019 at 9:10 PM Hey Line...a great win for you and your dolly! congrats. Line Gauthier October 4, 2019 at 10:03 PM Thank you, Jeanne. Most appreciated.

Sheri Fresonke Harper October 4, 2019 at 8:52 PM Congratulations on your fourth place win in the Invitation to Play Contest, Line. I found your form fit the poem and fit the style of play as a child, enjoyed reading it. Line Gauthier October 4, 2019 at 10:02 PM Thank you so much, Sheri. Most appreciated.

Susan Ashley August 12, 2019 at 9:50 PM This is such a lovely and enchanting poem, Line, in content and in shape. I especially liked your last line :) Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Line Gauthier August 12, 2019 at 10:00 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Susan.

P.S. Awtry August 10, 2019 at 10:37 PM Congratulations Line! Line Gauthier August 11, 2019 at 5:37 AM Thanks, PS. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong August 6, 2019 at 10:31 PM This poem is simply adorable Line! Congratulations on your deserving honor of having it be POTD! : ) xxoo Line Gauthier August 7, 2019 at 7:58 AM Thanks, Connie. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues August 6, 2019 at 4:43 AM Cute! Congrats on POTD, Line! Line Gauthier August 6, 2019 at 4:59 AM Thanks, Kim.

David Adeyemo August 6, 2019 at 12:48 AM great job Line Gauthier August 6, 2019 at 4:59 AM Thanks, David.

Timothy Mcguire August 5, 2019 at 6:18 PM Love it! Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 7:27 PM Thank, Timothy. much appreciated.

Jennifer Proxenos August 5, 2019 at 3:11 PM Hi Line how clever and cute - congratulations my friend on the honour bestowed upon you of POTD. Hugs, Jennifer. Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 4:06 PM Thank you so much, Jennifer. Most appreciated.

Mike Gentile August 5, 2019 at 2:42 PM Hello Line,Congratulations on your POTD xxoo Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 4:06 PM Thanks, Mike. Much appreciated.

Brandy Nicole August 5, 2019 at 2:22 PM Awe, this is soooooo cute!! :) I love it. Of course you changed her name to Sue!! After cutting her hair, seems like the right thing to do. I am smiling. Congratulations Line, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 4:06 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Brandy.

Paula Goldsmith August 5, 2019 at 2:16 PM Great POD. So cute & well done. You made me laugh. Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 4:07 PM Thank you so much, Paula. Much appreciated.

Kim Merryman August 5, 2019 at 2:15 PM Back to say congratulations on POTD! Blessings, Kim Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 4:07 PM Thank you so much, Kim.

Ann Gilmour August 5, 2019 at 1:22 PM Many congrats on POTD Line. I love it! With kindest thoughts Ann xx Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 4:08 PM Thanks, Ann. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper August 5, 2019 at 1:11 PM Great concert shape!!! Congratulations on POTD Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 4:08 PM Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Jeanne Mcgee August 5, 2019 at 12:26 PM A great shape poem. and what a fun play with LuluSue you had...gl in the contest and congrats on POTD. Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 4:08 PM Thanks, Jeanne. Much appreciated.

Kurt Ravidas August 5, 2019 at 8:33 AM In a sense, all Lulus eventually turn into Sues before the Buddha's lotus feet) Great POTD. Congrats, Line. Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 9:17 AM Strangely your comment makes perfect sense to me, Kurt. Thank you. LOL

Anne-Lise Andresen August 5, 2019 at 8:08 AM - ... funny ... and great figure, Line :))) - Let Sue get a wig ... maybe it should be blue :) - Congratulations so much on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 9:18 AM Fabulous idea, Sunshine. Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Tracy Storrier August 5, 2019 at 7:34 AM congatulations on POTD, thank you for sharing, really enjoyed this :o) Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 7:49 AM Thank you, Tracy. Much appreciated.

Winged Warrior August 5, 2019 at 7:27 AM She looks like a Sue lol...Congrats!! dear friend on POTD!!...sending Raggedy-Ann kits for repair lol...^WW^ :o) Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 7:49 AM Thanks, ^WW^. Much appreciated.

Vijay Pandit August 5, 2019 at 6:44 AM Innovative..creative..congrats Line on poem of the day. Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 7:49 AM Thanks, Vijay. Much appreciated.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 5, 2019 at 6:33 AM Both Johnny Cash and the author, Shel Silverstein would be proud! Darling piece Line, you know I'm fond of clever concretes ;), Congratulations on POTD! xomo Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 6:37 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Maureen.

Charlie Knowlton August 5, 2019 at 5:05 AM Very creative poem Line…Congrats on POTD…Well deserved. Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 6:37 AM Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Tom Cunningham August 5, 2019 at 4:50 AM Very creative Line, love the shape. Congrats on POTD. Tom Line Gauthier August 5, 2019 at 6:38 AM Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger August 4, 2019 at 6:00 PM When someone invites Line to play, she goes to town! What a great concrete! Line Gauthier August 4, 2019 at 6:32 PM LOL thank you so much, Caren. Much appreciated.

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