Get Your Premium Membership

Lullaby In the Sunset

Two hours before sunset My study commence To the table n' chair, I rivet My green-blue orbs Trying to absorb The itsy-bitsy letters printed on the papers After one & half hour I loose my power I shift n sit on the bed With all my books to read After some more minutes My legs extend N finally it's time to sunset Below the horizon, as the sun goes Shutter of my orbs, also close My books turns into Lordess Magically, of wisdom & knowledge My head on her lap With soft n heavenly hand She was fondling that Showering glitzy stars from sky Other worldly n silvery She sings lullaby Through her silken lips N I fall into a deep sleep 14March 2018 Poetry contest -Lullaby in the sunset Sponsored by -Vermillion Scythe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/19/2018 8:38:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Sakshi. I was captivated by your lovely content and enticing imagery. Your lullaby is heavenly! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Singh  Avatar
Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/19/2018 8:42:00 PM
Thank you sooo... much, Susan.Pleased with your comment. :)
Date: 3/19/2018 5:11:00 AM
Love the sunset picture you paint with your words. Lovely!
Login to Reply
Singh  Avatar
Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/19/2018 5:13:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 3/18/2018 5:28:00 PM
I love the imagery, especially in the last part of this poem, Sakshi. Good luck in the contest. HOpefully I can find time for this one.
Login to Reply
Singh  Avatar
Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/18/2018 6:35:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit & such a chummy comment! & & Thanks again for wishing me good luck!
Date: 3/16/2018 9:14:00 PM
Sakshi, a wonderfully poem! I enjoyed feeling your words! Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
Login to Reply
Singh  Avatar
Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/16/2018 10:56:00 PM
Thank you so much! & Thanks again for wishing me good luck, Eve :)-
Date: 3/16/2018 9:57:00 AM
It s a really lovely write and an enjoyable one to read, everybody gets tired after studying especially when the subject is boring and at that time what s better than listening to a lullaby and falling asleep, good luckin the competition
Login to Reply
Singh  Avatar
Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/16/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much!.. Exactly what happens when I sit to study :)-
Date: 3/15/2018 3:50:00 PM
Flowingly beautiful! I sure enjoyed it very much. Awesome job :)
Login to Reply
Singh  Avatar
Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/15/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thankyou sooooo much!
Date: 3/15/2018 8:57:00 AM
such a lovely poem, your pen writes so well...
Login to Reply
Singh  Avatar
Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/15/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 3/15/2018 7:07:00 AM
Sweet ending..lovely poem!
Login to Reply
Singh  Avatar
Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/15/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/15/2018 5:10:00 AM
- So lovely lullabye, Sakshi :) - Peaceful for a tired body - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely Thursday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Singh  Avatar
Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/15/2018 5:11:00 AM
Thank you so much.. :)-

Book: Reflection on the Important Things