Lullaby In the Sunset

Two hours before sunset 
My study commence 
To the table n' chair, I rivet 
My green-blue orbs
Trying to absorb 
The itsy-bitsy letters 
printed on the papers 
After one & half hour 
I loose my power 
I shift n sit on the bed 
With all my books to read 

After  some more minutes 
My legs extend
N finally it's time to sunset 
Below the horizon, as the sun goes 
Shutter of my orbs, also close

My books turns into Lordess 
Magically, of wisdom & knowledge 
My head on her lap 
With soft n heavenly hand
She was fondling that 
Showering glitzy stars from sky 
Other worldly n silvery
She sings lullaby 
Through her silken lips
N I fall into a deep sleep

14March 2018
Poetry contest -Lullaby in the sunset 
Sponsored by -Vermillion Scythe

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Date: 3/19/2018 8:38:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Sakshi. I was captivated by your lovely content and enticing imagery. Your lullaby is heavenly! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/19/2018 8:42:00 PM
Thank you sooo... much, Susan.Pleased with your comment. :)
Date: 3/19/2018 5:11:00 AM
Love the sunset picture you paint with your words. Lovely!
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Date: 3/19/2018 5:13:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 3/18/2018 5:28:00 PM
I love the imagery, especially in the last part of this poem, Sakshi. Good luck in the contest. HOpefully I can find time for this one.
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/18/2018 6:35:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit & such a chummy comment! & & Thanks again for wishing me good luck!
Date: 3/16/2018 9:14:00 PM
Sakshi, a wonderfully poem! I enjoyed feeling your words! Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/16/2018 10:56:00 PM
Thank you so much! & Thanks again for wishing me good luck, Eve :)-
Date: 3/16/2018 9:57:00 AM
It s a really lovely write and an enjoyable one to read, everybody gets tired after studying especially when the subject is boring and at that time what s better than listening to a lullaby and falling asleep, good luckin the competition
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/16/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much!.. Exactly what happens when I sit to study :)-
Date: 3/15/2018 3:50:00 PM
Flowingly beautiful! I sure enjoyed it very much. Awesome job :)
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/15/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thankyou sooooo much!
Date: 3/15/2018 8:57:00 AM
such a lovely poem, your pen writes so well...
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/15/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 3/15/2018 7:07:00 AM
Sweet ending..lovely poem!
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/15/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/15/2018 5:10:00 AM
- So lovely lullabye, Sakshi :) - Peaceful for a tired body - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely Thursday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/15/2018 5:11:00 AM
Thank you so much.. :)-
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