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Lullaby

Sweet cradled child, you slumber so
with gentle breathings, soft and slow

  The love I feel I cannot speak
  or tears would glaze upon my cheek

    I hold you close beneath the pane
    The night outside, it whispers rain

      The clouds drift by, one star that shines
      upon your face, as moonlight finds

        a face so graced by angel wings
        pink cheeks and eyelash flutterings

          Dream, sweet one, of magic lands
          Now, while you sleep, you grasp my hand

            Your tiny fist, hangs on to me
            I pray your world will always be

              a gentle place, that watches thee
              Do you dream of open seas

                Or sail on clouds and over trees
                through meadows like a soothing breeze?

                  If clouds arise to darken skies
                  may the angel eyes watch over you

                    I'll keep you safe in tender ways
                    till the sun comes back another day

                       So sleep my babe, I'll hold you tight
                       I'll sing this song for you tonight...



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For Contest Sponsored By Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Canama Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 3:25 AM
This is a wonderful poem straight from the heart of a superb mother! Congrats, Carrie!
Rycroft Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Congrats form Wendy x well written x
Selfa Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your spectacular win! Keep it up and there will be more placements to come! :) _HANS
Smith Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Beautifully accomplished. Congratulations!
Gentry Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 1:17 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Truly beautiful! A 7
Delaney Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Carrie: You can almost see the cradle swing too and fro. Such a tender, love filled poem. Congratulations on your top placement. Hugs, Suz
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February 26, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
Milliner Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 5:36 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie!!
Roper Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations on your “My Lovely Children” contest win, Carrie!!! Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Carrie, this is one of the sweetest, beautiful poems I have ever had the pleasure of reading.. Congrats on top win.. Adding to favs.. Hugs.. Arlene
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 2:28 PM
such a tender write Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Turner Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Very beautiful almost like a lullaby. Congratulations on your winning write. It is well deserved. Peace dear lady:)
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 2:08 PM
A lovely poem for loved child. Congratulations. Joyce
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Carrie, how sweet to see an image of a sweet cradled child, congrats on your top placement and thank you for entering my contest :)-luloo
Guzzi Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 1:56 PM
just lovely and amazing LIKE you! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the lullaby contest... another beautiful write and luv your title too..enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 5:57 PM
Sweet! Vince
Gass Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 11:01 AM
This is such a lovely, loving poem. Thank you for your thoughful comment. In return, I must say this would make a beautiful lullaby. Thank you for sharing. Love Robin
Gorelick Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 4:11 PM
Makes me want to grab my little ones and smell that baby smell. I love this.. BG
Siejka Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 12:27 PM
Hi Carrie- Thanks for your comments about Sunday Morning. One of the things about poetry is its complete honesty.
Foulk Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 10:35 AM
a lovely write and so warm and tender to the heart. thank you for reading my winds blowing and the storms did come, but not much snow, which was our first snow of the year.
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November 14, 2008 at 3:14 AM
I tell you, I cannot wait for grandkids! Not that I don't love my 5 little ones now, and am treasurong each day, but I hear grandbabies are the greatest thing ever, how it could get better than this, I don't know. Excellent gentle read, love Kristin
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November 13, 2008 at 11:26 PM
A tribute from the heart Carrie.Keep then a coming.Rgds Brian & thanks for welcome comments on my posting
Kandpal Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 8:04 PM
Such a heartfelt write, full of peace. Loved the way it flew so well with love and tender feeling. Great job! ~Jyoti
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November 13, 2008 at 4:26 PM
this is a wonderful piece. it makes me miss what i never had but think of often in these late years. and then i think of diapers and late nights and vomit on my shoulders and teenage daughters and i think "God was surely good to me." John H. Loving III very very good
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