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Sweet cradled child, you slumber so with gentle breathings, soft and slow The love I feel I cannot speak or tears would glaze upon my cheek I hold you close beneath the pane The night outside, it whispers rain The clouds drift by, one star that shines upon your face, as moonlight finds a face so graced by angel wings pink cheeks and eyelash flutterings Dream, sweet one, of magic lands Now, while you sleep, you grasp my hand Your tiny fist, hangs on to me I pray your world will always be a gentle place, that watches thee Do you dream of open seas Or sail on clouds and over trees through meadows like a soothing breeze? If clouds arise to darken skies may the angel eyes watch over you I'll keep you safe in tender ways till the sun comes back another day So sleep my babe, I'll hold you tight I'll sing this song for you tonight... ____________________________________________________________________ For Contest Sponsored By Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/29/2016 3:25:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem straight from the heart of a superb mother! Congrats, Carrie!
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Date: 2/28/2016 4:33:00 PM
Congrats form Wendy x well written x
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Date: 2/27/2016 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your spectacular win! Keep it up and there will be more placements to come! :) _HANS
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Date: 2/27/2016 8:33:00 AM
Beautifully accomplished. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/27/2016 1:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Truly beautiful! A 7
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:00:00 AM
Carrie: You can almost see the cradle swing too and fro. Such a tender, love filled poem. Congratulations on your top placement. Hugs, Suz
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Date: 2/26/2016 11:59:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/26/2016 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie!!
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Date: 2/26/2016 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your “My Lovely Children” contest win, Carrie!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/26/2016 3:11:00 PM
Carrie, this is one of the sweetest, beautiful poems I have ever had the pleasure of reading.. Congrats on top win.. Adding to favs.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 2/26/2016 2:28:00 PM
such a tender write Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2016 2:12:00 PM
Very beautiful almost like a lullaby. Congratulations on your winning write. It is well deserved. Peace dear lady:)
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Date: 2/26/2016 2:08:00 PM
A lovely poem for loved child. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2016 12:06:00 PM
Carrie, how sweet to see an image of a sweet cradled child, congrats on your top placement and thank you for entering my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 4/21/2010 1:56:00 PM
just lovely and amazing LIKE you! Light & Love
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Date: 4/21/2010 11:46:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the lullaby contest... another beautiful write and luv your title too..enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:57:00 PM
Sweet! Vince
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Date: 11/28/2008 11:01:00 AM
This is such a lovely, loving poem. Thank you for your thoughful comment. In return, I must say this would make a beautiful lullaby. Thank you for sharing. Love Robin
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Date: 11/14/2008 4:11:00 PM
Makes me want to grab my little ones and smell that baby smell. I love this.. BG
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Date: 11/14/2008 12:27:00 PM
Hi Carrie- Thanks for your comments about Sunday Morning. One of the things about poetry is its complete honesty.
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Date: 11/14/2008 10:35:00 AM
a lovely write and so warm and tender to the heart. thank you for reading my winds blowing and the storms did come, but not much snow, which was our first snow of the year.
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Date: 11/14/2008 3:14:00 AM
I tell you, I cannot wait for grandkids! Not that I don't love my 5 little ones now, and am treasurong each day, but I hear grandbabies are the greatest thing ever, how it could get better than this, I don't know. Excellent gentle read, love Kristin
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Date: 11/13/2008 11:26:00 PM
A tribute from the heart Carrie.Keep then a coming.Rgds Brian & thanks for welcome comments on my posting
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Date: 11/13/2008 8:04:00 PM
Such a heartfelt write, full of peace. Loved the way it flew so well with love and tender feeling. Great job! ~Jyoti
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Date: 11/13/2008 4:26:00 PM
this is a wonderful piece. it makes me miss what i never had but think of often in these late years. and then i think of diapers and late nights and vomit on my shoulders and teenage daughters and i think "God was surely good to me." John H. Loving III very very good
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