Lull-Lull-Lullabies

Lithesome fingers trailed along the ukulele’s frets as Lilah played her dulcet lullabies. Swaddled in a blanket, smiling, lay her little lad, looking up at her with large blue eyes. Lilah lilted, “Sleep, my son, for tranquil dreams await. Lull-lull-lullabies for you I sing.” As she crooned mellifluously lulling him to bliss, she watched small eyelids flutter-fluttering. Lightly, lightly, letting fingers roll along the strings, Lilah moved her delicate small hand. Eyes that lingered lovingly on the wee one saw him amble soundly into Slumber Land. May 29, 2017 for Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer's Contemporary Poetry Contest *I enjoy almost all types of poetry, but I suppose this represents more the Classical approach which I most often use (more lyrical and with some rhymes) though my focus is on alliteration here. I love the way L words sound!

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Date: 10/21/2017 9:13:00 PM
My eyelids are dropping... just kidding, but this is special.
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Date: 6/6/2017 10:31:00 AM
An excellent picture you have drawn with the colours of lullabies. Enjoyed a lot. Genus you are as always... Loved always my dear lovely friend, bl
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Date: 6/6/2017 9:03:00 AM
I like the way your lullaby sounds, Andrea:) lulls me in a nice rhythmic manner:)
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Date: 6/5/2017 9:06:00 PM
I love love love the lull-lull-abies! Very sweet!
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Date: 6/4/2017 6:54:00 AM
This is beautifully written Andrea. I can picture the entire scene through your wonderful imagery! 7 ; )
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Date: 6/2/2017 7:42:00 PM
I like this very much, Nope I haven't posted any new ones :( :) :) I will tho
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Date: 5/31/2017 7:07:00 PM
Just wonderful, Andrea, and I love all the "L" words you used. I'm going to sleep now...lol
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Date: 5/30/2017 10:48:00 PM
I initially found this very hard to understand as there are many new words for me...But after knowing the meanings I must say this is an amazing write....Beautiful....
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Date: 5/30/2017 12:36:00 PM
Hi Andrea, a wonderful, lyrical piece that flows so easily down the page. Such a gently beautiful piece. An excellent poem Andrea. Good luck in the contest. This one has the highest rating and has to be a fave. Such gentle, beautiful content Andrea. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/30/2017 5:26:00 AM
So beautifully written Andrea... Loved it... Thanks for sharing this lovely write...Reads like a winner... A big 7...
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Date: 5/30/2017 4:29:00 AM
Brilliant poem Andrea, great alliteration, enjoyed from start to finish, :))
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Date: 5/29/2017 9:33:00 PM
Well written alliteration, love your lyrical l's.
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Date: 5/29/2017 8:43:00 PM
I love this! It is simply adorable! Best of luck to you
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Date: 5/29/2017 6:49:00 PM
I love all the alliteration Andrea...it is one of my favorite devices.
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:41:00 PM
I can actually see the babies eyes slowly closing.
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:27:00 PM
Hi Andrea, This is just beautiful. I enjoy reading you because you are sooo talented. The picture that you painted with words of mother and son was just breathtaking. I could almost hear her playing the ukulele and singing a sweet lullaby. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis PS, I love the "L" sound too. Folk usually take the "A" off my name and pronounce the latter.
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:20:00 PM
an absolute joy to read I love the alliteration and soothing flow of the poem - wish it would lull me to sleep!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:04:00 PM
This is so nice, so peaceful Andrea ! Well written. :)
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