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Lugubrious Veil

Lugubrious veil Covers your lachrymose soul With melancholy Uncovering treacherous Grooves in the path you walked Nayda Ivette 1-2-2016

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Date: 1/2/2016 6:47:00 PM
great L alliteration, my friend!!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/2/2016 6:50:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for your feedback
Date: 1/2/2016 2:53:00 PM
love this!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/2/2016 6:49:00 PM
Thank you Jack
Date: 1/2/2016 2:45:00 PM
deep and sad Nayda a lovely tanka:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2016 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Jan. Hugs, Nayda.

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