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Ludix-Rym

LUDix-Rym Charm of glory glistened to glow when hand in hand, we stepped on snow. Fervent fun on snowballs to throw. Emotive nectar oozing slow. Pearl of passion pierced to grow. Dulcet dreams coming row by row. Forgot the terms ‘grief’ or ‘sorrow’. In zest and zeal zephyr to blow. Carefree lovers did never know Untoward event on tomorrow. Glances met to touch core of heart. Dormant desires going to outburst. Silent sublime souls got alert. Full devotion was to exert. Feelings cascading not inert. Only empathy, not to hurt. Love and compassion to impart. Committed not to get apart. Well set absolute, no doubt but merciless you were to depart. I was moved on your elegance. Mind was flavored with your essence in enclosure of your presence, now turning to reminiscence. Journey of life seeming nonsense Each moment feeling your absence. Imprisoned in sorrow of fence. Lost love to look through broken lens. As loner to proceed and hence watched you to walk far in silence. Granted you as perfect descent Closeness witnessed by Moon crescent. Glamour of amour! Commitment. Rest trivial irrelevant. Greeted as couple excellent. Thought unison permanent. Ruthless truth not to prevent. Shocked, stunned on untoward event. Leaving me alone, you just went. What to do? I am to lament. Once floated on amorous flow. Now shedding tears soaking pillow. Once enthusiasm to start. Now to restrict and to revert. Once swam in dreamy affluence. Now putting in dull despondence. Once soared high touching firmament Now sweet relation to ferment. Thought love as eternal entire. Now convinced, Love too to expire. 11/01/19 First Place. 'LUDix-Rym' Contest by Lu Loo

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Date: 11/9/2019 8:21:00 AM
This is wonderful and Congrats on your win. Blessings always, Gina
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/9/2019 9:33:00 AM
Thanks Regina. Love
Date: 11/8/2019 8:20:00 AM
A great read! Well done, poet! Congratulations!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/8/2019 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Kim for regular visit. Love
Date: 11/8/2019 4:35:00 AM
sweet Anisha! I loved this and am so glad to see you tried this and won. Great job! CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR PLACEMENT AND THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN MY CONTEST. x:)-luloo
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