Lucky's Look

Three legged dog stuttered into the bar
Barked with a limp which most thought a flaw
He soon found his voice 
and stated with choice
“I’m looking for the man who shot my paw”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/13/2018 3:29:00 PM
haha. cute ending!~! Congrats.
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Date: 9/13/2018 5:02:00 AM
Love it, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/12/2018 10:31:00 PM
LOL - charming limerick, Joseph. Congrats on your gold medal win. Very funny last line.
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Date: 9/12/2018 6:22:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Sara
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Date: 9/12/2018 4:26:00 PM
'Barked with a limp' lol, This is a great little limerick Joseph. Great punchline!
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Date: 9/12/2018 10:01:00 AM
Joseph, great job with this. I love the last line. Congratulations on your top win. Thanks for entering my contest...Charlie
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Date: 5/15/2017 8:45:00 AM
:-) Three thumbs up!
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Joseph Soper
Date: 5/16/2017 10:10:00 PM
cheers...
Date: 5/15/2017 8:14:00 AM
Love the play on words, Joseph. Very funny!
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Joseph Soper
Date: 5/16/2017 10:10:00 PM
Thanks Daniel
Date: 5/15/2017 1:28:00 AM
This is so amusing - that final line is sheer genius Jospeh! I spluttered tea on my keyboard !:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph Soper
Date: 5/15/2017 1:46:00 AM
Thanks Jan, glad the style seems to be working better. it feels like it fits my humor pretty well.
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