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Lucky Leaf

attached to its twig by a wiry petiole lucky leaf twirls like a pinwheel in the breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/28/2020 10:53:00 AM
The leaf I saw initially is still in mid twirl.
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Date: 9/26/2020 1:58:00 PM
Love the wording!
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Date: 9/26/2020 10:34:00 AM
I love this one, Gershon! I can see it :)
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Date: 9/25/2020 9:55:00 PM
I can see the leaf dancing. A beautiful poem, with wonderful imagery. Warm wishes. :)
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Date: 9/25/2020 8:18:00 PM
Lucky leaf indeed - a survivor. - an admirble quality! Have seen this so many times - the last leaf - and heard the song of its flutter. Enjoyed this multi-layered poem!
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Date: 9/24/2020 9:35:00 PM
Yes to face the sunshine, wonderful poetry, Gershon.
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