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Lucky Eight - Not For Contest

"Lucky Eight"

If it were not for the Pulchritude of her face
I would not have known that she was a Paragon of His Grace
Her frame had Charisma like I have never seen before
And after one conversation, I had so much more to Adore
But then I look at my phone, it's a quarter after Eight
Now I feel the Discomfort of forgetting my blind date
And then alas, a Revelation and it was just so amazing
The blind date must wait for this new trail is Blazing

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/30/2018 12:43:00 PM

Eric, I am with Connie, I like this one. It is just as well written, with great flow and rhyme.. Hugs Eve

Eric Boddie
Date: 7/30/2018 2:43:00 PM

well thank you mrs roper....I actually wrote this first, and then realized it didn't fit the rhyme scheme....;)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2018 8:57:00 PM

I read both Eric and I think I am partial to this one instead of the one you entered in the contest. Both flow smoothly with the required words. Best of luck in the contest. : )

Eric Boddie
Date: 7/29/2018 9:20:00 PM

thanks so much connie....this is the one i wrote first but it did not fit the rhyme scheme so i wrote the other one too....glad you like them both....;)