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Lucky 8

The Lucky Eight were paragons of the Old West: Their leader, adored for his charisma and wit , his three brothers, for pulchritude and grit , the Fifth wore a blazing red rose on his vest , number Six -- well it's said no one's ever been uglier , Seven quoted Revelation and said man was done 'fer , Eight always complained about saddle discomfort. Until the leader shot him one day saying, "Seven is luckier." Lucky Eight contest 7/26/18

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Date: 7/31/2018 9:38:00 PM
Lol. I enjoyed how you did this. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/26/2018 4:14:00 PM
I got a little chuckle out of this one, Jesse, best of luck in the contest. John
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 7/26/2018 4:35:00 PM
Thanks. Not my typical style, but that's what makes these contests so much fun.
Date: 7/26/2018 1:20:00 PM
Go win the contest, Jesse.. nice write!
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