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Lucky 8

He was the last of the Eight she bore
From the Discomfort of her belly came his sweet face
His single Blazing blue eye could not disgrace
The unique look of his spirit we Adore

It is his Paragon of naughtiness to embody
His Pulchritude brings smiles as his ears brush the ground
It was a lucky Revelation that led him to be found
He is Charisma galore, our Mr. Peabody!

7/10/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Awww. Very creative. Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed this.
Faulkner Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 2:02 PM
So glad you liked it, thank you, Susan!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 9:02 PM
The ending was terrific! Unexpected but so well done.
Faulkner Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Thanks so much, Caren!
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 1:12 AM
My, my oh my, what a rendering of Mr. Peabody, Michelle! Cute, clever, creative! ~ Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:45 PM
thanks, he is a handful sometimes!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 4:03 PM
This is so cute, Michelle! <3 Kim
Faulkner Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:45 PM
glad you like it, Kim!
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