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He was the last of the Eight she bore
From the Discomfort of her belly came his sweet face
His single Blazing blue eye could not disgrace
The unique look of his spirit we Adore

It is his Paragon of naughtiness to embody
His Pulchritude brings smiles as his ears brush the ground
It was a lucky Revelation that led him to be found
He is Charisma galore, our Mr. Peabody!

7/10/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/31/2018 9:21:00 PM
Awww. Very creative. Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed this.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/1/2018 2:02:00 PM
So glad you liked it, thank you, Susan!
Date: 7/15/2018 9:02:00 PM
The ending was terrific! Unexpected but so well done.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/19/2018 10:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Caren!
Date: 7/11/2018 1:12:00 AM
My, my oh my, what a rendering of Mr. Peabody, Michelle! Cute, clever, creative! ~ Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/15/2018 4:45:00 PM
thanks, he is a handful sometimes!
Date: 7/10/2018 4:03:00 PM
This is so cute, Michelle! <3 Kim
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/15/2018 4:45:00 PM
glad you like it, Kim!

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