Lucky

Some roads are like friends you never abandon
The travel is drawn by ghost carriage
Memories broad and bountiful
Pain lost and deceitful
Distance driven by how you roll
I wonder about vision and if I'll be struck by one
Out on the painted worlds streets
Lucky I've stretched the eyes with peace
Drifters,riders,wrongdoers, and friends
Writing our own history till the end
Some roads are like planets circling the sun
Another soldier of circumstance and so called fun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/16/2014 10:54:00 PM
This poem provokes some very haunting thoughts for the reader. I wouldn't want to travel down this road alone or at night.... I enjoyed this interesting write, Jeffrey. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/16/2014 5:25:00 AM
Jeffrey love your poem congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/15/2014 7:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win!! An inspiring write indeed.
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Date: 5/15/2014 10:02:00 AM
Jeffrey, Congratulations, on your sweet awesome poetry soup win. Love ~SKAT~
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Jeffrey Bovee
Date: 5/15/2014 6:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, I was really happy this morning , I enjoy your writing as well...
Date: 5/15/2014 8:06:00 AM
Beautiful write Jeffrey n a well deserved great win ! Congrats !
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Jeffrey Bovee
Date: 5/15/2014 6:01:00 PM
Really enjoy the contest and win, thank you!
Date: 5/15/2014 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Jeff
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Jeffrey Bovee
Date: 5/15/2014 6:02:00 PM
Thank you my friend much appreciated
Date: 5/15/2014 1:56:00 AM
Congratulations Jeff on your big win in PD contest. Verlena
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Jeffrey Bovee
Date: 5/15/2014 6:03:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words
Date: 5/15/2014 12:53:00 AM
Congratulations on a great win. Love, joyce
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Jeffrey Bovee
Date: 5/15/2014 6:04:00 PM
Thank you joyce
Date: 5/15/2014 12:45:00 AM
Hi Jeffrey. Congratulations, thank you for supporting my any poem contest # 30... Take, and enjoy your day/night... LUV ~LINDA~
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Jeffrey Bovee
Date: 5/15/2014 6:05:00 PM
Really appreciate the recognition, I feel very happy and had a great day as a result of the win
Date: 4/7/2014 10:10:00 AM
I thought this poem was wonderful -Love Courtney
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Date: 4/5/2014 4:10:00 PM
do tell. very beat, very cool.
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