Lucky

Some roads are like friends you never abandon
The travel is drawn by ghost carriage
Memories broad and bountiful
Pain lost and deceitful
Distance driven by how you roll
I wonder about vision and if I'll be struck by one
Out on the painted worlds streets
Lucky I've stretched the eyes with peace
Drifters,riders,wrongdoers, and friends
Writing our own history till the end
Some roads are like planets circling the sun
Another soldier of circumstance and so called fun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 10:54 PM
This poem provokes some very haunting thoughts for the reader. I wouldn't want to travel down this road alone or at night.... I enjoyed this interesting write, Jeffrey. Congratulations on your win!
Hamilton Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 5:25 AM
Jeffrey love your poem congrats on win hugs
Lindley Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Congrats on your win!! An inspiring write indeed.
A  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 10:02 AM
Jeffrey, Congratulations, on your sweet awesome poetry soup win. Love ~SKAT~
Bovee Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Thank you so much, I was really happy this morning , I enjoy your writing as well...
A. Sharma Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Beautiful write Jeffrey n a well deserved great win ! Congrats !
Bovee Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:01 PM
Really enjoy the contest and win, thank you!
Mehta Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Jeff
Bovee Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Thank you my friend much appreciated
Walker  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 1:56 AM
Congratulations Jeff on your big win in PD contest. Verlena
Bovee Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Thank you for the kind words
Johnson Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:53 AM
Congratulations on a great win. Love, joyce
Bovee Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Thank you joyce
A   Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:45 AM
Hi Jeffrey. Congratulations, thank you for supporting my any poem contest # 30... Take, and enjoy your day/night... LUV ~LINDA~
Bovee Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:05 PM
Really appreciate the recognition, I feel very happy and had a great day as a result of the win
Vinch  Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 10:10 AM
I thought this poem was wonderful -Love Courtney
Miers Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 4:10 PM
do tell. very beat, very cool.
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