Lucid Vision

My heart throbs fast while panic does linger on beholding child who frees himself from wheelchair there soaring high toward triumph against pain devoid of spasm midst sweet smile, running gladly… then I awake to thank the Lord* for peace-glow.
*Psalms 136:1 136 O give thanks unto the Lord; for he is good: for his mercy endureth for ever. October 5, 2023 10th place, "A hypnagogic dream" Iambic Pentameter Poetry Writing Premiere Contest; Sponsored by Suzette Richards; judged on 10/6/2023
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 2:57 PM
To imagine what will be…peace comes! Congratulations!
Richards Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 1:32 AM
Congratulations, Beata. Thank you for supporting my Hypnagogic Dream contest. In order to claim your prize of the book, DOWNTOWN – Poetic Devices, please soup mail me your e-mail address. Regards, Suzette
Richards Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 6:08 AM
You are welcome. Beata :)
Agustin Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Thanks so much for the placement. Thanks for the gift, more than a prize, that accompanied it. God bless you...
McBride  Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 7:39 AM
Beautiful poem, what a joy that would be to see the child smile after getting up : )
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