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Lucent the Whisper

There flies the moon, again. That disc of solid silver, craters the eyes ever watching - more than mere sight its light illuminating. There fly my hopes, again. Those two discs of glorious green, hers the eyes I was watching - behind them mirth and mystery shining.

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Date: 4/2/2018 3:13:00 PM
Such beauty in your brevity. Lovely Andy!
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Andy Sprouse
Date: 4/4/2018 10:27:00 PM
Thank you!! I thought in this case shorter might be better, glad to hear positive feedback on that.
Date: 4/1/2018 8:50:00 PM
Beautiful. Beautifully written.
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Andy Sprouse
Date: 4/4/2018 10:27:00 PM
Thank you!!

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