Loving Florence

her fantastical stories raised the hair on my chest
I am a girl and she gave me her wholesome best
her life was colorful which she did not mind sharing with me
I visited her Iowa farm house daily in the summer for afternoon tea

she told me tales children should not really hear
but I kept them to myself, for I loved this story-telling dear.
her name was Florence, and her outrageous stories were the best.
She had goats in her house, a nonconformist without societies test.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Meadows Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 12:46 AM
Florence sounds like an interesting friend. A good poem. Well done.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 4:40 PM
thank you - i have written about her often
Sambourne Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Florence sounds like a true non conformist. I truly admire + value those with a rebel streak. Thank you for sharing Florence + her individualism with us. Sincerest regards, Brian
Krutsinger Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 4:40 PM
she was such an individual!
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