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Loving and Losing : a Part of Me Died When You Died

Losing someone is like losing the very breath u take to survive Like holding in air, taking the deadliest,deepest dive Like someone knocked all the air,better yet, the life out of ur life Like they jabbed u in ur heart with the sharpest knife The emptiness inside ur soul,makes ur blood run cold Like red roses that stood high, that turn black, then fold Lost without ur eyes, in a dark empty wood. Grasping to reach anything u could. Nothing in reach for u to hold close No one around, when u need them the most Nothing to warm ur heart & keep it beating steady U didn't ask for this,unexpected, u weren't ready It's like a stiffness in ur body,like ur growing old anew No one around to console u Ur at a loss for words No chirping for black birds Ur missing apart of u & inside's a hole They used to stick with u,like a mole Losing love is like losing ur mind Every thought,but the reason, u still can't find Enough memory to last ur lifetime,but they're still not there. Ur mind is gone,but u can't think as to where. A part of ur heart & mind have vanished with the lost of someone so dear & u love them & miss them more with every tear Thinking bout them, only makes it worse It happened so quickly, u'd think it was a curse Loving & losing a lover or a friend Family, or next to kin It's a universal emotion, which we all can relate They accepted their fate & we must face We'll get through it at our own pace Because we know , they're in a better place .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/19/2012 2:28:00 AM
Sorry for yours lost...they`re in a better place. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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