Loving Request

Girl,
         heart of poem,
        soul of poetry ... don't run away!
        Do not depart now...
        Girl, honey eyes,
        why do you must leave
        and enrage the  dawn ...?
        Stay a little longer
         until you feel tender
        and realize that love exists,
        and it's yours ....
        Impressive legs girl
         of minimum steps ... why
         do you wish to leave so soon ...?
          I promise if you stay,
          of your dreams do
          the best fantasy ... of
          your yearnings, offer you further
          love and added value ...!
          Crystal feet girl ...
          Star soul ...!
          Fear nothing ...
         If you surrender me all ,
         I will donate you double of me ...
         Stay ... stay with me ...!




       Sugested song
       muchacha  Sings spinetta- almendra

          https://youtu.be/kW-c7M7KhPY

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Date: 1/15/2021 11:58:00 AM
Alakas, I want to ask you a question: Is anyone getting the vaccine where you live? I heard that your country has the 3rd bout of the virus on the news today. so i was thinking of you. Be careful.....! Salute Darlene
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Date: 1/16/2021 11:41:00 AM
Hello Alakas, we have to wait until April to get the vaccine. We are lucky to to get it then. We are in our 2nd lock down. Only go out when we need to . We have 115 cases of the virus. Our hospitals are full. Salute Darlene
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Date: 1/15/2021 2:56:00 PM
Nobody is getting vacine until now... we have negationism that Controls everything badly... my state and capital city lives awaiting vacines...Up today we are more or less calm...Brazil os not up to date in that matter due to bad administration...thank you for asking ! salute alkas
Date: 1/15/2021 11:50:00 AM
Hello Alakas, he is coaxing his girlfriend to stay. He is trying very hard to make her stay. She is nervous and i sense she wants to leave. Salute Darlene
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Date: 1/15/2021 11:54:00 AM
Salute Darlene Yes but, with a request as soft as that, maybe she will stay ....]salute, alkas
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