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Lovestruck

I wished and wished for a girl like you That I could cherish until a hundred and two How can I ever get you to notice me Write you a poem of how it could be Then present it to you down on one knee That's just too corny, you wouldn't believe The old fashioned style just isn't the key Should I act like a man, dress all in black Grow a mustache and drive a Cadillac Throw money all around like I'm a fat cat God only knows what you might prefer Tee shirt and shorts or a long mink fir I'll just be me the next time we meet I'll probably keep it short and sweet And invite you out for coffee or tea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/22/2010 9:19:00 AM
Cute one, Mitch. Have you found a girl? Just be youself! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:38:00 PM
this is really cute. oh how it drives one crazy just thinking about what to do for the one in whom you admire most.<3 ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:52:00 PM
My dear friend! How are you? Hope all is well. Write when you've got some time, k? Your friend, JA
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Date: 7/5/2010 6:00:00 AM
Lovely poem. The end is real cool.
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:34:00 PM
kool write Mitch she got you by the toe man heh B.boy
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:35:00 AM
very heartfilled,, enjoyed your sweet write...P.D.
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Date: 7/2/2010 6:09:00 AM
I think the invitation for coffee or tea would get the best response, Mitch, although offering a poem would be quite a romantic gesture that many women would appreciate. And thanks for the Soup mail on the city of "Moron." It was enlightening and made me laugh. Enjoyed the rhyme, meter and message of your great poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/1/2010 9:59:00 PM
a very attractive and graceful poem on love.go ahead with your work.
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