Lovestruck

Giddy as a schoolgirl picking lipstick,
giggling helplessly and hopelessly in love
as joyously she taunts him with her towel, 
blissfully aware that this is Sunday
and it's just the two of them!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Guzzi Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 6:10 AM
Hmmmmm, why wait? Light & Love
Gass Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 7:06 AM
What a nice way to spend a Sunday. This is such a sweet poem. Love Robin
George   Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 1:13 AM
Wonderful picture you paint here, Keith. lainie
Mac Donald Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 9:50 AM
Hi there, Keith! Oh my, this sounds like frisky fun.:) A hit on my romantic funny bone, for sure. Yeah, I know funny bones don't always make one smile, but some surely do! Don't have to rush forward to a happy ending in this one, it's a continuous existence. Very nice piece, Keith...one that is certainly uplifting. Wishing you and yours the best..God bless! Love, Mikki
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November 30, 2008 at 2:46 PM
Well, I'd like to spend Sunday that way.. This is warm and semi-wonderful!:)..laughingly said. BG
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