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Love's vertigo

Love's vertigo Outside snow is falling, no leaves left on the trees but inside there's a heat, that brings me to my knees Trapped inside the vertigo, as lovers rise and fall Isn't dizzy desire the answer, whenever romance calls? July 17,2019 Excerpt from my song Between the whispers and the sighs For Greg Barden's contest Arbitrium Divisa 3

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Date: 9/19/2019 5:55:00 PM
John, I had to read the original this wonderful excerpt came from. I Faved it and was very happy this led me to read your original poem. Add it to the bottom of this post, won't you? I loved it! Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/19/2019 8:24:00 PM
Thanks Connie for your enthusiasm for my poem, I appreciate your comments more than you know, thanks especially for the fave, I am truly honored!
Date: 9/17/2019 9:57:00 PM
Beautiful contrast of the cold outside and the heat of desire within. Congrats.
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/18/2019 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Juliet for you kind visit and comment, glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 9/15/2019 7:39:00 PM
congrats for your well deserved win here. I see I commented to this in July. I guess we waited a long time for this contest to close out and I am now very pleased to see the results.
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/15/2019 8:12:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for your nice comments.
Date: 9/14/2019 7:47:00 PM
Oh yes, the heat and the passion of dizzy desire! I love this, John. The contrast of the cold outside and the heat inside is striking and makes this poem sizzle. Congratulations on your excellent win! warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/14/2019 8:25:00 PM
Thanks Susan
Date: 9/14/2019 8:16:00 AM
love this, congratulations on your win my friend :) hugs
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/14/2019 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Sandy
Date: 7/19/2019 10:50:00 PM
Dizzy desire, yes that's the answer! I love this excerpt, I think I will love the song!
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/22/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thanks Becca
Date: 7/19/2019 7:13:00 PM
When passion unfolds love can leave us dizzy especially in the heat of the moment... passionate piece here John, great choice for the contest :) hugs
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/22/2019 4:11:00 PM
Thanks Sandy for the nice comment!
Date: 7/19/2019 4:08:00 PM
so passionate. That is love, all right. Good one, John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/21/2019 9:14:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 7/18/2019 8:36:00 PM
When a beautiful mood has been created, lingering in love- to the point of no return. Will leave you breathless. Dizzy-- perhaps. Your thoughts made me smile. :) And, softly sigh. ~ Brandy
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/21/2019 9:14:00 PM
Thanks Brandy for your kind words and visit!
Date: 7/17/2019 8:25:00 PM
You left me spinning, Johnny Boy...great verse my friend...bol...sending gravol your way lol...^WW^ :o)
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/18/2019 7:56:00 AM
lol you crack me up, thanks for the kind visit!
Date: 7/17/2019 12:11:00 PM
Hello John Hamilton,you created a beautiful verse.Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2019 6:00:00 PM
Your welcome. have a nice evening my friend.
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/17/2019 12:15:00 PM
Thanks Darlene!