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Love's Reflection

Love neither gives or takes but from itself. Be not wiled by fantasies of arrogance. Take no more than is offered by yourself. Leave nothing trapped in tortured irrelevance. Seek not a barter for desires that sue your heart. Worthiness is the only tender that comes due. Suffer willingly the melody of pain it may impart. Bleed joyfully from the wounds that will ensue. As tree branches lift their hopes towards Heaven's door, hands together reaching higher than alone will seek heights that love's imagination most beautifully implores that from a poets words unending ecstasy must speak. Whatever you desire your life to be, may loves reflection be all you see
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Gist Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 3:32 PM
I truly remember the intimacy. Nice...
Smith Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Thank you J....
Promise Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:48 PM
“Suffer willingly the melody of pain it may impart. Bleed joyfully from the wounds that will ensue.” Very encouraging for those who had given their hearts and had it painfully wounded. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed. Blessings, RP.
Smith Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Thank you Rainbow.
Ashley Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 9:21 PM
A beautifully written sonnet Charlie with a smooth flowing theme that is a joy to read. Very insightful and romantic and expressed so well. Your last two line are stunning!
Smith Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Thank you Susan.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 11:16 AM
Charlie, I wrote this sonnet on paper, I like this poem so much..that I am going to write this poem in my homemade poetry book to read over and over as many times i like. Because this poem is speaking to me. Have a nice day my friend.
Smith Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 11:21 AM
You are very kind Darlene, thank you...
Inman Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 9:22 AM
A gentle poem filled with truth. If we could but follow the instructions Charlie.
Smith Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Indeed James, thank you...
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:44 PM
What a thoughtful poem on true love, Charlie! Reads wonderfully.
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 9:57 PM
So glad you liked it Andrea, thank you...
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 10:21 AM
Charlie,You wrote a beautiful poem. I felt swept up while reading it. I did a monoku. Have a nice day my friend.
Smith Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 10:48 AM
Thank you again Darlene...
Krampe Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 7:03 PM
Lovely sonnet with so much wisdom.
Smith Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 7:20 PM
Thank you Agnes.
Severo Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Charlie, this is so romantic, peace and love xoxoxoxo
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Thank you Aurore...
Hamilton Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Wonderful message Charlie, enjoyed this sonnet very much.
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 10:47 PM
Thank you John...
Warrior Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 6:41 AM
Your reflection is blinding Charlie lol...great write my friend...^WW^
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 11:27 AM
Thanks WW...
Lane Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 10:00 PM
I wasn't around for a couple of days when you posted this one, Charlie, but I'm here now and appreciating the beauty of your words.
Smith Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 11:13 AM
Thank you Lin...
Callus Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Beautiful philosophical thoughts, Charlie. Yours are the words of one who has experienced love in its highs and lows. Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Paul.
May Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:20 PM
Beautiful sonnet Charlie, best wishes in the contest
Smith Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 7:41 AM
Thanks Joseph, don't much enter those anymore. Just wrote this for your reading pleasure, Ha!
Roper Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:31 AM
That last stanza has a big impact in your verse, Charlie, I enjoyed reading. ~* Thank you for the visit on my poem.. Eve
Smith Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 10:24 AM
Thank you very much Eve...
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 8:16 PM
I agree with Kim, love is beautiful ,and hurts but we do heal from the pain in time.I liked this poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 9:39 AM
I read the soup mail. Thank you for your help. I am still a beginner writing poetry. So jump in to help me when you feel i need it. Thank you.
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 10:46 PM
Thank you Darlene.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Quite beautiful! Love hurts and heals! Love is worth the cost!
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Thank you Kim.
One Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 4:33 PM
Beautiful sonnet Charlie, nice rhymes and flow..
Smith Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 9:40 PM
Thank you SO, it's been a while...
Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 5:33 PM
Great poem, Charlie! You are a true love philosopher, all could learn wisdom of the heart at your feet. Beautiful sonnet. Memorable lines throughout ... whatever you aspire your life to be, may love's reflection be all you see. Pure poetry. Love and peace always.
Smith Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 12:31 AM
Same to you Freddie...
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 3:50 PM
A poet indeed! A magnificent example of how to give and accept love Charlie! You are not only a master poet my friend but a philosopher! This is a keeper, maybe even a framed wall hanging! Though I have little space left with all my five year old granddaughter's drawings on my walls! A Fave for sure. I loved it! : )
Smith Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 12:30 AM
Connie, you've got the right stuff on your walls, thanks...
White Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Beautiful sonnet Charlie. And a fantastic message.
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 1:52 PM
Thank you Darren.
Daniel Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 5:27 AM
Such a beautiful sonnet, Charlie with an excellent message:)
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Thank you Jo.
Downing  Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 9:08 PM
WOW! Absolutely an outstanding work of art. Mr.Smith, I'm favoring this piece :)
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 12:15 AM
You are so kind Akkina, thank you.
Bateman Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 7:03 PM
Hello Charlie, A Superb Sonnet -- absolutely!! A FAVE TOO!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Smith Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 8:38 PM
Thank you Gary.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 5:43 PM
I'll take that under advisement. Well written love sonnet. I enjoyed reading it and fully accept the wishes of the ending.
Smith Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 8:36 PM
Thank you Janice.
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