Loves Promise

For Timothy Lee
The soulful whisper of love’s promise bore an enthused mood when it softly clued me love assured. In silent speech, an otherness air did somehow speak soothing assurances I innocently absorbed as honest but I was only nine when those promise words occurred. Decades hence, I have ridden attractions to passions that proved to be romantic cons dressed in love’s fashions. Such snagged me in years of love commitment stress battles that dysfunction ultimately throttled. I was left with only brutal pains, numb dreams and traumatic regrets as darkly grey stretched by threats of lonely. Then came your engaging grin and blue-eyed smile. Any thought of charade vanished when you displayed such a steadfast pursuit that my cynical came loose. Our soul’s mirrored love has long shown soulmate impacts as proof love’s whispered promise was truth, solidly exact. In silent speech, an otherness air did somehow speak - 'he will have a three-letter name' - I never forgot that share.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Scars Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 12:27 PM
oh those blue eyes..great poem sweet CayCay :)-luloo
May Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 9:55 AM
I love the ending of this beautiful write CayCay...Congrats on your win..
Mcconnell Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 3:16 PM
A lovely piece CayCay penned so well with great imagery and amazing use of words to make it so eye-catching. A real stunner of a write! poetry hugs, Gordon
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 8:15 PM
You brilliantly convey the dark storms before the light and rainbow appears CayCay. This is so lovely, and more so because it is true. I loved your romantic happy ending! I am sure this will do well in the contest my friend. xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 9:45 AM
I love this Happy destination. Hugs Rick
Proxenos Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Joseph will love this CayCay - a unique write with intense emotion throughout - well penned CayCay - hugs, Jenny.
Adams Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 6:07 PM
What an emotional write one can feel the pain in the first few verses before your knight arrived to soothe your aching soul! Beautifully written poignant poem :) hugs
Rose  Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Your poem in itself is a great promise, Beautifully versed.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Great line, CayCay: I have ridden attractions to passions that proved to be romantic cons dressed in love’s fashions.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 3:34 PM
hmmm, you got some lovey words at age nine? Lucky gal!! I know that you have found your soul mate now and I am so happy for you. This really shows us your deep joy in that.
Green Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 12:58 PM
This was beautiful, soft and tender. You have captured that soulful whisper wonderfully in this. But my eyes are hazel, not blue. : ) Best wishes in the contest CayCay.
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