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Love's Persistence

Love's persistence Drip...Drip...Drip...as drops fall to the rocks below Split...Split...Split... the rocks split open from the persistent flow Try...Try...Try...I try to penetrate your heart of solid stone Know...Know... Know...I know with persistence our love too can grow Open...Open...Open...your heart cracked wide open for me Now we know with love's persistence our hearts can be together and be free John Derek Hamilton April 04,2016

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Date: 4/7/2016 10:39:00 AM
Well expressed, some hearts just have a protective concrete facade. Persistence is indeed the key.
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/10/2016 7:45:00 AM
So true thanks Richard, congrats on 3 or 4 top best new poems well deserved
Date: 4/4/2016 2:03:00 PM
- True love will always grow - A lovely poem, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/6/2016 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
Date: 4/4/2016 1:19:00 PM
You are absolutely right John! I really enjoyed reading this.
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/6/2016 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Fiona

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