John Hamilton Poet Rhyme

Love's Persistence

Love's persistence


Drip...Drip...Drip...as drops fall to the rocks below

Split...Split...Split... the rocks split open from the persistent flow

Try...Try...Try...I try to penetrate your heart of solid stone

Know...Know... Know...I know with persistence our love too can grow

Open...Open...Open...your heart cracked wide open for me

Now we know with love's persistence our hearts can be together and be free


John Derek Hamilton
April 04,2016

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Richard Lamoureux April 7, 2016 at 10:39 AM Well expressed, some hearts just have a protective concrete facade. Persistence is indeed the key. John Hamilton April 10, 2016 at 7:45 AM So true thanks Richard, congrats on 3 or 4 top best new poems well deserved

Anne-Lise Andresen April 4, 2016 at 2:03 PM - True love will always grow - A lovely poem, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :) John Hamilton April 6, 2016 at 9:52 AM Thanks Anne Lise

Fiona Callaghan April 4, 2016 at 1:19 PM You are absolutely right John! I really enjoyed reading this. John Hamilton April 6, 2016 at 9:53 AM Thanks Fiona