John Hamilton Poet Rhyme

Love's Frenetic Energy

Love's frenetic energy


Ensnared by love's frenetic energy
Heart strings strumming to a Calypso beat
We move with syncopated synergy
passions swells rising from two lips in heat



John Derek Hamilton
May 27,2019

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Robert Kinard December 27, 2019 at 8:26 AM I'm sure you know more about love than I do. This poem is beautifully written. John Hamilton December 27, 2019 at 9:35 AM Thanks Robert Nice to see you pass by my page again!

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2019 at 6:05 PM well, congrats, you have placed, my friend!! and you deserve very much to be on this list, my friend. John Hamilton June 14, 2019 at 12:15 PM Thanks Andrea I appreciate the visit and kind words!

Line Gauthier June 13, 2019 at 9:58 AM What are vacations for! The calypso beat comes through nice and loud. Congrats on your win, John. John Hamilton June 13, 2019 at 2:26 PM Thanks Line!

Sandra Adams June 12, 2019 at 8:00 PM you painted quite a passionate picture in this one through your words~ very erotic and beautifully penned!!! John Hamilton June 12, 2019 at 10:16 PM Thanks Sandra for your kind words and visit to my page!

Andrea Dietrich May 28, 2019 at 6:03 PM very passionate!!! Good luck in the contest. I am loving these short forms! John Hamilton May 29, 2019 at 1:35 PM Thanks Andrea, I chose this one knowing what Greg likes, hopefully he likes it I've never placed in one of his contests so let's see how it goes!

CayCay Godwin May 28, 2019 at 3:53 PM ew la la - my fingers burnt when I touched the keyboard - this is a mood setter and me, well, I have to go be a kitchen cleaner. I've got to shake off these words! Bummer that. Truly hot ink, John - a wow from me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay John Hamilton May 29, 2019 at 1:33 PM Thanks Cay Cay for your enthusiastic comment, and the wow, glad you enjoyed!

Brenda Chiri May 28, 2019 at 7:23 AM Ah John this was very beautifully written! I so enjoyed it! John Hamilton May 28, 2019 at 8:37 AM Thanks Brenda for your kind words and visit!