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Love's Frenetic Energy

Love's frenetic energy Ensnared by love's frenetic energy Heart strings strumming to a Calypso beat We move with syncopated synergy passions swells rising from two lips in heat John Derek Hamilton May 27,2019

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Robert Kinard

Date: 12/27/2019 8:26:00 AM

I'm sure you know more about love than I do. This poem is beautifully written.

John Hamilton
Date: 12/27/2019 9:35:00 AM

Thanks Robert Nice to see you pass by my page again!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2019 6:05:00 PM

well, congrats, you have placed, my friend!! and you deserve very much to be on this list, my friend.

John Hamilton
Date: 6/14/2019 12:15:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I appreciate the visit and kind words!

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/13/2019 9:58:00 AM

What are vacations for! The calypso beat comes through nice and loud. Congrats on your win, John.

John Hamilton
Date: 6/13/2019 2:26:00 PM

Thanks Line!

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/12/2019 8:00:00 PM

you painted quite a passionate picture in this one through your words~ very erotic and beautifully penned!!!

John Hamilton
Date: 6/12/2019 10:16:00 PM

Thanks Sandra for your kind words and visit to my page!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2019 6:03:00 PM

very passionate!!! Good luck in the contest. I am loving these short forms!

John Hamilton
Date: 5/29/2019 1:35:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I chose this one knowing what Greg likes, hopefully he likes it I've never placed in one of his contests so let's see how it goes!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/28/2019 3:53:00 PM

ew la la - my fingers burnt when I touched the keyboard - this is a mood setter and me, well, I have to go be a kitchen cleaner. I've got to shake off these words! Bummer that. Truly hot ink, John - a wow from me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

John Hamilton
Date: 5/29/2019 1:33:00 PM

Thanks Cay Cay for your enthusiastic comment, and the wow, glad you enjoyed!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 5/28/2019 7:23:00 AM

Ah John this was very beautifully written! I so enjoyed it!

John Hamilton
Date: 5/28/2019 8:37:00 AM

Thanks Brenda for your kind words and visit!