Love's Flame Drenched

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                           She desired orchestra music so
                                                                 
                                                                     he~fiddled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 7:13 PM
I see this won strong in Brian's contest. A belated congrats to you, Sara.
Ball Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 9:06 AM
This is too funny. It relly made me smile. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB
Beadnall Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Whatever my girl desires, i will oblige. Ilike it
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 4:43 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in the contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 1:38 PM
This was a great Monoku.Thanks Sara for all those kind and sweet congrats and comments you send on my poems I surely do appreciate them.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Foulk Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 10:53 AM
you can't beat that, she got her wish. loved this deligtful piece you wrote. thank you for commenting on Lilac's At Home.
Susan Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 10:09 AM
Clever poem. I must have missed the winner's list for this. I'm glad I saw it now!
Greenlee Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 8:20 AM
Beautiful...The things men do for women.Well written.Enjoyed....Thanks again for supporting my recent win....
Sweetheart Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 5:25 AM
oh that spark is still showing Sara.. such a cool write ..and loves flames is drenched in these lines so passionate .. super enjoyed .. my friend..luv..
Brown Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 5:23 AM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Sara. It is a pleasure to see and read your poetry. Hoping you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 4:35 AM
Big smiles for this one, Sara. Congratultions on taking first place! Awesome monoku. Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 10:10 PM
Great Monoku, Sara. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
Loving Iii Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 5:54 PM
that was quite an explanation you gave. john
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 5:32 PM
Sara. Something about this one. I really loved it!
Loving Iii Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 4:01 PM
such a strange desire.
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